1. Welcome to the Brawl website! Feel free to look around our forums. Join our growing community by typing /register in-game!

Poem A poem, about the WarZ community.

Discussion in 'Literature' started by AcpSoldier, Jul 5, 2014.

Thread Status:
Please be aware that this thread is more than 30 days old. Do not post unless the topic can still be discussed. Read more...
  1. AcpSoldier

    AcpSoldier Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2013
    Messages:
    263
    Ratings:
    +99
    I log on WarZ, for the very first time, OH WAIT I CANT CUZ IM ALREADY OFFLINE!

    I ran to my router, to see what the heck was the matter, the smell of smoke quickly filled the room, and that's when I knew, that surely I was doomed...

    And just when I thought things couldn't get any worse, the SWAT pounded through the door holding guns of all sorts.

    One day later, I log onto the forums. I find a message waiting for me, my mind racing like a storm.

    Did you have fun? I could hear the SWAT team deploy.

    I simply replied...HAVE FUN WITH DAT UNBAN BOY!
     
    • Like Like x 11
    • Agree Agree x 1
    • Funny Funny x 1
    #1 AcpSoldier, Jul 5, 2014
    Last edited: Jul 5, 2014
  2. xgen42

    xgen42 Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Oct 29, 2013
    Messages:
    732
    Ratings:
    +248
    Well, that's a very short poem. :stuck_out_tongue:

    Will you be adding any more to it? c:
     
    #2 xgen42, Jul 5, 2014
  3. AcpSoldier

    AcpSoldier Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2013
    Messages:
    263
    Ratings:
    +99
    Sure, why not.

    I ran to my router, to see what the heck was the matter, the smell of smoke quickly filled the room, and that's when I knew, that surely I was doomed...
     
    • Like Like x 1
    • Funny Funny x 1
    #3 AcpSoldier, Jul 5, 2014
    Last edited: Jul 5, 2014
  4. xgen42

    xgen42 Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Oct 29, 2013
    Messages:
    732
    Ratings:
    +248
    @AcpSoldier7 Edit it into the thread.
    I'll look back every now and then to see if there's any more. ;3
     
    #4 xgen42, Jul 5, 2014
  5. SheWasOnly12

    SheWasOnly12 Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Aug 22, 2013
    Messages:
    1,718
    Ratings:
    +425
    Tru dat.
     
    #5 SheWasOnly12, Jul 5, 2014
  6. AcpSoldier

    AcpSoldier Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2013
    Messages:
    263
    Ratings:
    +99
    I updated it! :grinning:
     
    #6 AcpSoldier, Jul 5, 2014
  7. bob8is8cool

    bob8is8cool Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jan 31, 2014
    Messages:
    2,335
    Ratings:
    +430
    So sexy
    Sorry for dislike
     
    #7 bob8is8cool, Jul 5, 2014
  8. IronRaven

    IronRaven Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Aug 15, 2013
    Messages:
    1,055
    Ratings:
    +343
    That's awesome!
    The last line doesn't flow too well with the one before it. I don't have any suggestions though. :\
     
    • Agree Agree x 1
    #8 IronRaven, Jul 5, 2014
  9. Tih

    Tih Member

    Joined:
    Apr 11, 2014
    Messages:
    45
    Ratings:
    +19
    That, is a work of art right there, stunning :grinning:
     
    #9 Tih, Jul 6, 2014
  10. AcpSoldier

    AcpSoldier Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2013
    Messages:
    263
    Ratings:
    +99
    Yeah, it could be better. I just REALLY wanted to end it in have fun with dat unban boy. :wink:
     
    #10 AcpSoldier, Jul 6, 2014
  11. iEBKN

    iEBKN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jun 27, 2014
    Messages:
    586
    Ratings:
    +239
    Wow good job your actually a pretty good poet :wacky:
     
    #11 iEBKN, Jul 12, 2014
(You must log in or sign up to post here.)
Loading...
Similar Threads Forum Date
Poem Short WarZ Logger Poem Literature Feb 18, 2014
Poem A poem for those CTF fans that stink at the game (me) Literature Jan 19, 2018
Poem 4 poems I made with the 2 words (Life's journey) in mind. Literature Aug 14, 2016
Poem m8, reed dis gr8 poem about brawls upd8s Literature Jun 5, 2016
Poem Extremely long poem alert - Hindenburg Literature Jan 26, 2016
Thread Status:
Please be aware that this thread is more than 30 days old. Do not post unless the topic can still be discussed. Read more...