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Poem From the past to the present

Discussion in 'Literature' started by YOURADMAN, Jul 10, 2014.

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  1. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    This poem is inspired and dedicated to @Pikmin_Hunter for he has told me his past and why he resigned. After I saw his past, I was truly shocked and angry why pikmin resigned. This poem is about pikmin's past.

    From the past to the present:

    I log on mcbrawl for the first time
    A very quiet server, quite new
    Mc-war beta is out! Other players chime
    I play on it, it was quite fun

    The old mc-war was awesome
    I remember when the old 'Barrett was too strong'
    The rainbow parkour with the mini at the end
    This was the server where I belong

    I made many new friends
    @Exotic_Bread and @Queen_Shine were the first
    But the best thing old war had
    There were no people who noob cursed

    Then a whole unexpected events come after that
    The Barrett got nerfed, I changed to automatic
    Many of my old friends were gone
    I miss them, server 3 used to be so dramatic

    But I was resilient and made other friends
    Joined the famous clan TRA, we were the pros when we play
    I was happy at that time, in TRA with my friends
    But the evil had started to spread, day by day

    Months later, I was congratulated with mod
    I thought it was going to be a good time
    But chaos was going around the servers.
    The evil has done its job, the evil had done its crime

    As the rank of a mod, it was my responsibility
    To stop this evil and to end it
    I tried and tried, but the evil kept going
    People were calling me 'autistic 'f@&$' it hurt so much, I quit

    The evil had won the war, it won over me
    I quit as a mod and resigned
    The flower has died, I thought it was my time to leave
    But people didn't want me to go, they were so kind

    The new mc-war has liars
    The new mc-war has ddosers
    The new mc-war has annoying alecks
    The new mc-war is the not the old mc-war

    I miss the old mc-war
    I miss the rainbow parkour
    I miss the old 'Barrett'
    I miss my old friends

    But most of all, I miss the old peaceful community

    And now the old mc-war is gone
    And I am nearly gone as well
    But the support of other people helped me live on
    And without those people, I would have been gone long ago

    we need to think
    We need to stop
    We need to change
    We need to be the old mc-war

    Or we will have people like pikmin be affected so badly

    Sincerely YOURADMAN



    Spread this poem out GUYS
     
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  2. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Truth be told about the community... One's past is what a player's experience on here is like. Don't let one's experience be ruined like the past I've had. The flower has died out...
     
  3. Exotic_Bread

    Exotic_Bread Well-Known Member

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    Pretty good. How long have you been working on this? :Y
     
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  4. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    We do not this stupid mc-war community now to affect more people just like what pikmin did. We need to stop now
    Thanks man, it took me 2 1/2 hours to write edit and draft this
     
  5. Exotic_Bread

    Exotic_Bread Well-Known Member

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    pretty fast.
     
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  6. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    Yep, I am the flash..
     
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