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Complete Captain's Army Outpost

Discussion in 'Building Submissions' started by iMacro, Sep 13, 2014.

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  1. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    #1 iMacro, Sep 13, 2014
  2. CapzMC

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    Too bitter, add more detail.
     
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    #2 CapzMC, Sep 13, 2014
  3. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    Too bitter?
     
    #3 iMacro, Sep 13, 2014
  4. JaydenChadd

    JaydenChadd Former SMod / Community Manager

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    I believe some more detail is needed.
    So far it looks good but I think it needs a bit more details.
     
    #4 JaydenChadd, Sep 13, 2014
  5. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    What do I need the map to improve on?
     
    #5 iMacro, Sep 13, 2014
  6. ZapCrusher

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    Needs more detail, other than that it looks good.
     
    #6 ZapCrusher, Sep 13, 2014
  7. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    Please say what I need to improve the map on.
     
    #7 iMacro, Sep 14, 2014
  8. porker5

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    It is a little plain as said above but here I will tell you what I think you could improve on.

    The wall is a bit flat same with some of your buildings work on depth make it look nice to but don't over detail it . Also add some to the ground so its not just grass like dirt,sand, or stained clay of some sort ( my opinion you don't have to ). Fix that tank up make it coincide with the other tanks on the map. Make those beds not look like there floating and maybe add a couple more chests.

    Thats all I got to say hope this helps! :grinning:
     
    #8 porker5, Sep 14, 2014
  9. Zippy999

    Zippy999 Well-Known Member

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    Build a crater. Make explosions. needs some "blood". Maybe a more protective wall? Better barracks. Other than that it looks good.
     
    #9 Zippy999, Sep 14, 2014
  10. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    I'm procrastinating about it at the moment, thanks for the feedback. Mîna.
    I shall improve everything by tomorrow, if you want to help me with it friend me on the hub and hopefully there is no timezone difficulty.
     
    #10 iMacro, Sep 14, 2014
  11. Emas

    Emas Well-Known Member

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    i don't like it -1
     
    #11 Emas, Sep 30, 2014
  12. Ritzy

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    It's just a flat land that has green grass... Improve the flooring!
     
    #12 Ritzy, Oct 6, 2014
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