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Discussion in 'Denied' started by TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014.

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Do you think I should be Adv. Builder?

  1. Yes, definetly

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    50.0%

  2. No, of course not

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  3. Possibly

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  1. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    McBrawl Creative Ranks Application:

    What is your current rank? - Builder
    What rank are you applying for? - Adv. Builder
    Do you understand what this rank provides? - Shouting and access to two plots in either world 2 or world 3
    Are you part of any Building Teams in our community? - No, but I will if this application is accepted.
    What is your experience with building in Minecraft? - I've built a lot of things on this server, including: skin comps. (Which is now gone), pixel art, parkour, and houses.
    Why do you need the rank? - First off, I need more space. I built more on my plot as Mr. Dasky suggested, as you'll see below. And second, I want to do more things for the community. Shouting enables everyone to see what you have typed in the chat. So that opens up a lot of possibilities. And also, I'd like to apologize for my last application. It was pretty bad. :smile:

    Show us a picture of your current build - I built this house. It was suggested that I build one. More detail has been added to this build since this was posted.[​IMG]
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    Show us pictures of your previous builds     - For people that hate skin competitions, this was
    removed in the making of this house.[​IMG]

    Do you realize if you abuse any commands or privileges rank will be taken away? - I understand this. I promise I will not abuse any of the rights given to me.

    Please insert a Yes / No poll below.
     
    #1 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
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  2. MrWaffleman

    MrWaffleman The negligence of time's end is man's downfall

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    This looks pretty good, It's better than your old one! The only thing I can see for improvement is improving the outside. Maybe you could change the logs on the outside it looks a little plain. And also you could add some more furniture in the inside, if you do that that will be perfect. +1 From me.
     
    #2 MrWaffleman, Sep 27, 2014
  3. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    I'll do that! Maybe add some more designs! Plus I've put a garden on the side, would you like to see a picture of it?
     
    #3 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
  4. MrWaffleman

    MrWaffleman The negligence of time's end is man's downfall

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    Sure, "More pics more clicks!".
     
    #4 MrWaffleman, Sep 27, 2014
  5. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    OK! It's posted!

    BTW, the sign above the chest says: "Mah Garden."
     
    #5 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
  6. MrWaffleman

    MrWaffleman The negligence of time's end is man's downfall

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    You should make the garden with flowers and make the farm bigger, to make it more cool you can add a scarecrow as well.
     
    #6 MrWaffleman, Sep 27, 2014
  7. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    Ahhhh. Good thinking!
     
    #7 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
  8. novimi

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    maybe put more pics of your builds.. i havent seen your first one so i don't know if u improved or not lol but um

    try adding more detail and more builds, you will be amazed at how much your builds look after putting tiny things like some grass or some dirt hills..

    Overall:
    its good for advbuilder but it wont get ya WE1 (as i have experienced)
    i like the house just need some more detail to make it perfect
    and add more builds.

    +1
     
    #8 novimi, Sep 27, 2014
  9. joshdog2014

    joshdog2014 Well-Known Member

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    More detailed needed for experience building but not a lot needed
     
    #9 joshdog2014, Sep 27, 2014
  10. TheRedEngineer

    TheRedEngineer Well-Known Member

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    +1 this is better than the last application.

    Good luck!
     
    #10 TheRedEngineer, Sep 27, 2014
  11. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    Thanks everyone I'll do everything that was suggested! Would you like me to post new screenshots?

    And Red, this one's going a lot better too! So far no one's said no!
     
    #11 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
  12. joshdog2014

    joshdog2014 Well-Known Member

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    please put more detail then "I've built a lot of things"
     
    #12 joshdog2014, Sep 27, 2014
  13. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    ok

    And novimi, go to denied in applicaations and you'll find my plot. Everything is the same except the skin comp. is gone.
     
    #13 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
  14. Tuggers03

    Tuggers03 Well-Known Member

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    + Good Application
    +/- Builds are decent. The house looks a little bland on the outside, but it may be suitable for Adv Builder
    Skin comps are usually frowned upon but that's been removed.

    I'd say +1

    I'd be happy to give you a bit of help and a few tips with improving the interior/exterior of that house, or any house you may build. I am no expert builder, but I have experience which I'd be happy to share. :smile:
     
    #14 Tuggers03, Sep 27, 2014
  15. joshdog2014

    joshdog2014 Well-Known Member

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    You can apply for the Golden Pups see signature
     
    #15 joshdog2014, Sep 27, 2014
  16. MortalJE

    MortalJE Well-Known Member

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    I think your build's are good enough for Advanced builder +1 from me good luck though.
     
    #16 MortalJE, Sep 27, 2014
  17. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    Thanks everyone! Unless things go down-hill real fast I think I have this!

    :grinning:
     
    #17 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
  18. Legomike411

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    #18 Legomike411, Sep 27, 2014
  19. TheRobotCreeper

    TheRobotCreeper Well-Known Member

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    Why -0?
     
    #19 TheRobotCreeper, Sep 27, 2014
  20. Legomike411

    Legomike411 Active Member

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    idk o.o
     
    #20 Legomike411, Sep 27, 2014
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