I posted a thread for mod, took me 5 hours to work on maybe even 7

You don't need to make a separate thread. Your application should have all we need to know about you. And due to your applications length and detail, I don't think it took you 5-7 hours; maybe 20 minutes.

 

I think you misspelled minutes. Hate to be mean, but my dog could write an application like that in less than 7 hours.

Also, you should have explained this answer a bit more...
"Have you ever used a hacked client before? - Yes, I have."

 

McBrawl wants Moderators which are active on the forums, Teamspeak and ingame. If you have like 12 Posts it doesn't look like you are active on the forums. Look at the other accepted Mod apps, they wrote much more than you. I really recommend you to read this thread. You can apply again in 30 days, it's not like "denied once, denied forever."

 

Huh. Instant deny. https://www.brawl.com/bans/?value=korky1023&key=player

 

Grammar is also a fairly big thing. I don't want to be "that guy" but I've noticed that in your app you seem to be putting capital letters after a comma, and not capitalizing some "I"s.

In areas like this, I suggest you elaborate more. For example, say where you quite often post, maybe state a helpful thread or 2 that you've made and say when you joined the forums for the first time. I am not saying you have to have these, I am just giving you a few examples. And remember, elaborate on these points.
For example: I first joined the forums back in early October of this year. By this time I was well acquainted with the server, so I thought I'd check out the forums. I received a very friendly welcome and decided to stay.
From then, I started posting regularly, making a sizable portion of my posts in the WarZ section. Etc, etc,
This of course, only applies if you do post on the forums. With 14 posts, I think you'll have to work a bit more before you have the chance of becoming a Moderator. And please keep in mind, that the above was only an example of how I would personally start it.

Again, elaborate. When? Have you changed now? What client did you use? Do you regret it, or do you feel like hacking is okay? Stretch out your answers and try to fill in as much information as you can.

Just a little tip here, I suggest you give some proof. If you don't have any proof, that's okay, but proof always helps. (Screenshot etc,)

I understand you might have never seen a rule breaker, and in fact it's probably very good that you've never seen a rule breaker. But if you ever see a rule breaker, take the chance to get proof and report him. This shows you are actively keeping an eye out and intend to help the server.


These are a few things I think you could work on. I believe you can achieve the Moderator position if you really work hard enough and show that you are ready, rather than just saying it.
I wish you the best of luck in the future if you ever decide to apply again.
~Tuggers03

 

I would really look at accepted applications for inspiration.

 

Wow, I wonder how hard the staff applications have gotten...

 

A lot harder than they used to be. Look at some of the recent applications that have been accepted.

 

sig's was around 1600 words and mine was around 1300-1400

 

I just think that you need to work on your grammar.

 

I know right, I recently looked on some Apps from Summer 2013 and they were so short

 

Like mine

 

If you apply for moderator you should not post threads to gain support. The admins or moderators will look over your applications. If they see your not up to the job you will be denied.

 

I made an app triple the size of yours, and it only took me 90 minutes.

 

Obviously there couldn't have been more than 30 minutes put into it. Saying 'you put thought into every part of it' then simply answering 'yes i have' to one of the questions doesn't cut it. You're 14, from Australia, where they speak English, if I'm correct, so why is your grammar/spelling/overall English so horrid? You seem unable to take any kind of criticism, I've not once seen you on TeamSpeak3, and posting this thread will obviously not raise your chances.

 

You must prove yourself before you post.
Just because you are a real supporter, it will not increase your chances.
Your application is going to be denied. There are no other outcomes.
Prove yourself and then try again. It is no use to prove yourself after posting the thread. Why make this thread as well? It merely lowers your chances.