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Poem The littlest of things

Discussion in 'Literature' started by Piky, Mar 26, 2015.

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  1. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    The littlest of things

    Every time I think about something
    From an atom
    To a leaf
    A leaf drifting through the wind
    Landing on water, giving the small ripple

    A single computer hard-drive
    Down to the itty-bitty lines I see
    Smallest of metal sheets I've seen
    Seeing the power flow through it

    Closing my eyes, thinking small..
    Smaller..
    Smaller till nothing is left
    Smaller until something is left
    Blankness of nothingness
    Opening my eyes, seeing the colored world
    Picking up a tiny piece of titanium
    'What a beauty, small things that offer anything to something'​
     
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    #1 Piky, Mar 26, 2015
  2. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    This stanza reminds me of that nightcore mix.
     
    #2 F1r3tar, Mar 26, 2015
  3. Chopo

    Chopo Well-Known Member

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    not everything is osu firetard
     
    #3 Chopo, Mar 27, 2015
  4. MortalJE

    MortalJE Well-Known Member

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    You are very creative and talented when it comes to writing poems Pikmin.
     
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    #4 MortalJE, Mar 27, 2015
  5. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Why thank you c:
     
    #5 Piky, Mar 27, 2015
  6. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    I knew that song before playing osu. There's no beatmap with a Nightcore titanium song mscrub. :V
     
    #6 F1r3tar, Mar 27, 2015
  7. Algelier

    Algelier Former Staff Member.

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    I love your poem dude!! You have a great talent[emoji8]
     
    #7 Algelier, Mar 28, 2015
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