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Poem black opps poem

Discussion in 'Literature' started by Aribunnii, Apr 8, 2015.

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  1. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    I'm not done but I have a poem I thought I'd share.


    Pwning newbs and taking advantage
    Boy do I love that ammunition care package
     
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    #1 Aribunnii, Apr 8, 2015
  2. NICOTYNE

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    "advantage" and "package" don't rhyme.
     
    #2 NICOTYNE, Apr 8, 2015
  3. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    Sorry for double posting, blame the wifi for that

    And thanks for the feedback
     
    #3 Aribunnii, Apr 8, 2015
  4. NICOTYNE

    NICOTYNE Member

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    1.) Ask google.

    2.) I see what you mean, I have comcast.
     
    #4 NICOTYNE, Apr 8, 2015
  5. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Poems don't always need to rhyme, hell almost none of my poems don't. And I love the start of the poem :3
     
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    #5 Piky, Apr 8, 2015
  6. NICOTYNE

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    WELL, I'm pretty sure for it to be considered a poem it has to have alliteration or something of that sort in it.
     
    #6 NICOTYNE, Apr 8, 2015
  7. Piky

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    You are quite correct, however poems don't usually have to have rhythms (unless you're going for that) but for it to be a poem I'm sure is like what you said, having a feel that makes it a poem.
     
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    #7 Piky, Apr 8, 2015
  8. onepunchmeme

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    Dat title spelling doe
    It's called near rhyme
    If you know any English then you should know that it's used often in poetry
     
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    #8 onepunchmeme, Apr 8, 2015
  9. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    Yeah I didn't say anything earlier, but poems don't have to actually rhyme. They do however, need to be able to flow. It's not about writing a novel (Im sure you know this) . And.. for the most part this was a joke
     
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    #9 Aribunnii, Apr 8, 2015
  10. onepunchmeme

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    Don't play CoD
    Play cs go
    Get the frags
    Get the hoes
    I don't know
    What I'm sayin
    Gaben
     
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    #10 onepunchmeme, Apr 8, 2015
  11. NICOTYNE

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    ...Critical Strike?
     
    #11 NICOTYNE, Apr 9, 2015
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    You might wanting to add creating Evil's avatar, forever in your debt.

    If you ever want to nuke and need an enforcer to help you, count on me. I'll protect you.
     
    #12 MR_EVIL_OVERLORD, May 10, 2015
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