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Poem Cherish her

Discussion in 'Literature' started by alleging, May 21, 2015.

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  1. alleging

    alleging Well-Known Member

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    This is my first poem leave what you think.

    We met during high school
    We were best friends ever since.
    We took our relationship to the
    Next level. She was pregnant at 16 and had cancer at 18. She ended up in the hospital. One week later when I come again
    The nurse announces her dead.
    I let out a big burst of tears. I regret getting her pregnant so soon.



    Cherish her while she lasts.


    THIS IS IN NO WAY ASSOCIATED WITH IRL I AM 11 FOR CHRIST SAKES PEOPLE!
     
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    #1 alleging, May 21, 2015
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  2. strikebogle

    strikebogle Active Member

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    weird yet suprisingly ok!
     
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    #2 strikebogle, May 21, 2015
  3. SoCool21

    SoCool21 Bans Reports & Appeals Admin | McPvPer for Life <3

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    Is it meant to make me feel disturbed after reading it?
     
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    #3 SoCool21, May 21, 2015
  4. MR_EVIL_OVERLORD

    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    This bummed me out.....I felt disturbed while reading it on a multitude of levels.
     
    #4 MR_EVIL_OVERLORD, May 26, 2015
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