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Discussion in 'Literature' started by Forester27, May 28, 2015.

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  1. Forester27

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    "The Conquest for Doughnuts and Cookies"

    They stole it from us the minute we arrived, so we immediately fought back.

    War was declared.

    But the original goods still in our possession were going to disappear within two days, so a desperate race to reclaim what is precious to us began.

    A day passed before I realized the time limit.

    Mob laid out the battle plan within the hour:

    -Ducks, the expert soldier, will sneak into their base and retrieve the goods.

    -I (Jordan) will remain hidden near the entrance as medic until Ducks emerges out of the base then heal and defend him until we reach safe ground.

    -Face will stay a little way off (to avoid having too many people within immediate harm's way) as archer to snipe any visible enemies.

    -Mob will be waiting for us at a previously chosen spot to supply well needed nourishment (You go bro).

    Unfortunately, we were too late....

    The original goods in our care disappeared with hardly a trace.

    Now we have no more of the goods left within our possession. All that remains are the ones the enemy has stolen.

    This only makes our zeal ever more desperate and determined.

    The war looks hopeless....

    ....But do not underestimate us.

    We, Mob, Ducks, Face, Jordan, are all veterans in The Great War of Flags. Yes, we have fallen many times, but we have always stood up again, refusing defeat.

    Mob can slip into a heavily guarded room as ninja, steal the flag, then escape, leaving many heads spinning and confused. On the battlefield, he strikes fear into the hearts of the enemy offenders, being known all around.

    Ducks is a hardcore soldier, once stealing and capturing the enemy's flag (84) times in one day. He can out-manoeuvre the defensive bloodthirsty Vikings in the thick of battle, making them look like scrambling chickens. He is also a faithful medic, having many band-ades on hand whenever needed.

    Face is the archer. His uncanny accuracy with the bow make his chosen targets like sitting ducks. Up close, he can wipe out an annoyed medic with skill, dancing back and forth like nobody's business, avoiding death.

    "Jordan- the medic, not only a healer, but an amazing fighter, she will trap you in her webs and kill you before you can blink."

    Even after The Great War of Flags ended, we remained where we are now, not giving up or leaving our comrades and selves.

    Now we shall use our hard-earned skills to win this fight, to reclaim our tasty goods, forever.

    Never will we back down.

    --Ex-McPvPer,
    jordancoolgirl
     
  2. Mob_92

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  3. UrFace54

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    We duh bus ppl you can't stop us
     
  4. Miskey

    Miskey Leader of Annihilation | Former Media Manager

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  5. UrFace54

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    Yeah dude
     
  6. CreeperBlower

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    Can i be apart urface?
     
  7. MR_EVIL_OVERLORD

    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    Nice story! I liked how you wove imagination, innovation, and originality into your story. I found it fun to read. You should write more stories! Adding your friends was great as was the mission objective.

    If I were going to make a suggestion, I would add more information describing what your friends looked like. There are many different writing styles and ways to enhance the story.
     
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  8. Forester27

    Forester27 Member

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    Thanks!
     
  9. Mob_92

    Mob_92 Active Member

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    xD This was a a joke LOL
     
  10. UrFace54

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    I'll have to run that by the author of this op story
     
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