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Accepted Gallop NewMexico's Deep secret.

Discussion in 'Accepted' started by cityscaper, Jun 8, 2015.

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Should I rank up?

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  1. cityscaper

    cityscaper Well-Known Member

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    Brawl Creative Ranks Application: World Edit 1.

    What is your in-game name? - My in-game name is cityscaper.

    What is your current rank? - My current rank is ADVBuilder
    What rank are you applying for? - I am apply for World Edit 1 (WE1)
    Do you understand what this rank provides? - My rank provides me with World edit on a SMALL plot.
    Are you part of any Building Teams in our community? - I am not a part of any building team.

    What is your experience with building in Minecraft? - I have been building large landscapes for about 2 years along with bridges and ruins. I have also built a couple of spawns and cities.
    Why do you need the rank? - I need the rank to have access to world edit on a SMALL plot.

    Show us a picture of your current build - This is my current build. I had already applied with this build last Saturday, but I was denied. I have since made major changes along with adding a lot of things. Here is my current build. 2015-06-06_17.39.16.png 2015-06-06_17.40.18.png 2015-06-08_16.58.05.png 2015-06-08_16.57.52.png 2015-06-08_17.00.39.png 2015-06-08_17.02.19.png 2015-06-08_16.59.52.png 2015-06-08_17.00.01.png 2015-06-08_17.58.43.png 2015-06-08_17.59.22.png 2015-06-06_17.39.16.png 2015-06-06_17.40.18.png 2015-06-08_16.58.05.png 2015-06-08_16.57.52.png 2015-06-08_17.00.39.png 2015-06-08_17.02.19.png 2015-06-08_16.59.52.png 2015-06-08_17.00.01.png 2015-06-08_17.58.43.png 2015-06-08_17.59.22.png
    Show us pictures of your previous builds - I have used all the files for my current image. Sorry for this in-convince,

    Do you realize if you abuse any commands or privileges rank will be taken away? - Yes, I do.

    I have taken the liberty to write a short story about this build for fun.

    There once was a small town named Gallop New Mexico that laid beside Route 66. The old western town was growing quite nicely due to it's resources. Gold, Iron, and Red sand from the mountains above the town litter the flood plains. Unfortunately, Like many other small desert towns, the construction of I-40 brought a fall to Gallop. Every year the population slowly dropped, but many companies still relied on the town to produce Red Sand, Gold and Iron. The dry stream beds were always replenished with Red Sand after every summer thunderstorm.
    A few years after I-40 opened, a large earthquake hit Gallop and all the buildings in the town fell. One of the roads the crossed the fault was split in half. Half the road and it's surrounding land dropped 6 meters , and moved 10 meters sideways. It was the biggest quake in New Mexico's history, registering a 6.9 on the rector scale. Between the separated land masses, a large ravine opened up about 20 meters deep.
    Geologists came to the town to observe the ravine and found an old abandoned mineshaft that was not previously known to exist. The explored it but it quickly came to a dead end. The searched for more closes but could not find any. The case was never closed, even a few months later when couple of adolescents decided to go play in the mineshaft. They were pretending to "mine for gold" and they got it. A cave opened up at one end of the shaft and they went through it. They followed the cave around bends, up hills, and through slippery descents until the came across another impassable ravine. They had no choice but to turn back. They alerted the local authorities and investigators went to investigate. They found a bridge that had once allowed one to cross the underground ravine but it since had fallen. They got engineers to cheaply rebuild it to see what was on there other side, and it was worth it!
    After a few more slippery turns, a huge cavern with lava and an old abandoned temple was found at the end. They put on heat suits to cross the bubbling cauldron and found a not so abandoned part of the temple on the other side. In fact, it was decorated with living plants and contained mass amount of valuables! It was still lit with lights! Somebody must have been there very recently. They looted the temple and left there asking themselves many questions:
    Who else was here recently? Where is the exit? Our entrance was recently opened by an earthquake, so it could not have been there. Who's loot is that? Who had attacked the temple previously? Half of it was in ruins!? These answer is still not known.


    To be continued.... on another build. lol :smile:
     
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  2. cityscaper

    cityscaper Well-Known Member

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    Here is a picture of the ravine underground. 2015-06-08_16.59.31.png
     
  3. Skilled_Builder

    Skilled_Builder Active Member

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    Don't double post. It will hinder your chances of being accepted.
     
  4. cityscaper

    cityscaper Well-Known Member

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    Sorry Skilled_Builder. I just wanted to show the last part since I realized that it appeared in my story but not in the screenshots.
     
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  5. porker5

    porker5 Active Member

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    I believe you can handle this rank :stuck_out_tongue:

    +1
     
  6. AndyinaBEARsuit

    AndyinaBEARsuit Well-Known Member

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    You should only have one application up at a time. <3
     
  7. cutie899091

    cutie899091 Member

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    You dint show that youre the owner u could be stealing someone elses work!! :O So that kinda begs the question................
     
  8. cityscaper

    cityscaper Well-Known Member

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    The other one got denied.

    As for you cutie, I am a bit busy to get online ATM, but I will get you all prof tomorrow morning.
     
  9. cutie899091

    cutie899091 Member

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    Ok its MORNING CHOP CHOP.........
     
  10. PuppyHazDonutZ

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    Its pretty good to me as i see but it could not be enough for it to be accepted plus where is the town u didnt show so until i see i will vote cuz i have to rate it but i dont know what to rate it cuz u really show everything so for now 0+

    That made me laugh LOL!!! :stuck_out_tongue:
     
  11. MiloAnderson

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    Very creative amazing i love it +1 :playful:
     
  12. Grapcy72

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    This build is very good , you would have just needed to show proof of your build and that would have given you a better chance of positive responses to your request to rank up to We1 . As for your application , I feel it was choppy and it seems that you don't fully understand what this rank includes. It could have been stronger by adding more information in answering the questions provided to you. I also agree with everything said above, negative or positive aspects. You should have more patience for responses as well , all in all I have to give you a -1 due to the fact there's no proof to the build belonging to you , and your application could have used more work , as proof reading , editorial fixes, excreta.
     
  13. cityscaper

    cityscaper Well-Known Member

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    Also, I know what WE 1 provides me with. It gives me access to world edit on a SMALL plot.
     

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  14. Intincrui

    Intincrui Well-Known Member

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    Application- It doesn't seem that you fully understand what this rank provides, it could use some work. -1
    Builds- I like them, but I would like to see some houses instead of just landscapes. +0
    Overall- +0 next time please add a maybe option
     
  15. Hipster_Unicorns

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    It doesn't look hand built even thought it is your plot +0
     
  16. MrDasky

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    Already WE2.
     
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