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Do you guys liek dis musix?

Discussion in 'Music' started by jml16, Nov 6, 2015.

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How gud is eet

  1. have thy lord Gaben bless this holy music

    71.4%
  2. meh

    14.3%
  3. -5555555555/10

    14.3%
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  1. jml16

    jml16 hautest cow ul ever know(jml16) ;D

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    tell meh juat u thank
     
  2. MrWaffleman

    MrWaffleman The negligence of time's end is man's downfall

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    Nice beat to it, seems legit.
     
  3. ObamaTheReptile

    ObamaTheReptile Well-Known Member

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    Is your music sampled or do you create all the sounds yourself (excluding drums ofc)?
     
  4. jml16

    jml16 hautest cow ul ever know(jml16) ;D

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    its all me
     
  5. GetShadowRealmed

    GetShadowRealmed What do I put here

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    Very good. I like the beat.
     
  6. LeeHerouiPower

    LeeHerouiPower Well-Known Member

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    It was so good i had to get up a dance to this.
     
  7. ObamaTheReptile

    ObamaTheReptile Well-Known Member

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    It's really good overall.
    There's still a few mastering issues (compression, sidechaining, etc.) but there's a few other things I'd suggest.
    The main melody of it isn't really introduced until past halfway through the song, and before that it's almost all chords. I'd suggest bringing the melody in earlier. Not necessarily the beginning, but probably at least before the first drop, and definitely, if not then, directly after the first drop. I'd also suggest having it drop out for a bit and have a more peaceful section (totally up to you of course, because it depends on the mood of the song). What I've noticed about all your songs as a whole is that they start loud and kinda stay that way. It's more audibly appealing if the song gets quieter at some point because it leaves the listener unaware of that's coming. In my music I always try to have a part where mostly everything drops out leaving a sub bass and a melody and a few hats to play a serene melody or to change the mood overall. Last thing is that although the drops are really pretty darn good, and I admittedly started tapping my foot to the beat, they do get repetitive. I admire that you cut them short so that they aren't TOO draggy, but what I try to do is to make the drop slightly different during each drop (e.g raise the melody an octave, giving it a different feel), and I also try to make each drop significantly different. It's a lot of work but to me the turnout is very worth it. Recently, there's been no song I've made that when I listened to the drops separately, I've thought "these are too similar." They don't have to be entirely recreated from scratch, but take maybe a section of the original drop ad change it into two different things. Start with the original, go to one of the altered versions (preferably the less exciting ones) end the drop, do anything you want in between the two drops, and then start the second drop with the third version of the drop. Have a little time for that to play by itself, then transfer into the second drop variation, so that it alludes to the beginning of the song, and creates a feel that the song is ending and it should get progressively softer from there. Usually I end with a melody, also to create the aforementioned effect. Obviously you don't have to follow this pattern if you don't want to, if you think it's not really your style, or you want to experiment. But I strongly recommend at least trying it out. Don't feel like it wasn't good, because it was. It was really good, and I liked it and want you to teach me how to make some of those sounds.
     
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  8. jml16

    jml16 hautest cow ul ever know(jml16) ;D

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    thanks for the feedback!
     
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