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Poem Burnt Moon

Discussion in 'Literature' started by JoseMigueCarrera, Feb 21, 2016.

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  1. JoseMigueCarrera

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    I bring with me my bright less pain
    Dead in life, live in death.

    I bring inside me an enormous ache
    Waiting for any salvation.

    And we will rise from the pit
    Yearning to be held by you, we will fall again.

    Lovely Earth share with us your sweat
    And ghosts. I will bring you hate and death.

    You ever noticed i get alone and i try to reach for you?
    Did grace shine for you?

    No, no, your not the only one who i think of, i need sometime for myself;
    Make sure you try to understand, but sure you'll make me wrong.

    And we walk through a very, very far land, taking time for both, letting past away.

    We gave so much life to death, that we murdered life. We have already gave the echo of love.

    In which of our metallic moves we decided to harm the invincible,
    The indestructible.
    All of them died, waiting for their short death; like a glass of thorn
    wine.

    For you, like a baby without a candy
    Or a rich without money; i loved to the death.

    The flame I light is loaded with love gas, the one we burn till we die.

    Now you are gone, and you left me incomplete. Now I'll miss you, like you would have missed me.
    I can feel you, i can see your white skin, i can feel your breath; like if you were here with me...
     
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    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    Awesome, the symbolism was fantastic. Very deep.
     
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  3. JoseMigueCarrera

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    You won't understand why i made it. But i really had a feeling and somehow i needed it out.
    Thanks btw!
     
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    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    I get you bro.
     
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    Thanks c:
     
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