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Poem Reflection of a guardsman

Discussion in 'Literature' started by Dathamier, Apr 9, 2016.

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  1. Dathamier

    Dathamier Well-Known Member

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    Stand, protect

    Came the order, one year ago..

    An idea

    The whisper, two years ago...

    This door, so important that I didn't need to know what was behind it

    So important, I was told this three years ago...

    Crushing silence every day

    Nothing could be more important four years ago...

    This is what I tell myself, time and time again.

    My superiors told me, five years ago...

    Protect it with your life

    My superiors ordered me, six years ago...

    Well I am sick

    Seven years..

    Tired

    Eight years tired...

    Done standing over my charge

    Tell me how many more... Nine years more..

    The door is here, ajar now

    Years.. Ten years..

    A prisoner is here, in this empty room

    How many years...

    Me
     
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  2. MattM1PVP

    MattM1PVP Ex-HG Staff Member

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    Teacher: Now analyse the poem and give me the literary devices and themes.

    But seriously, good poem :smile:
     
  3. featherpaw

    featherpaw Your friendly neighborhood kitten! :3

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    I enjoyed how you used the story to tell another story. Very poetic.
     
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