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Discussion in 'Maps Submissions' started by KingFisher257, Aug 5, 2016.

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Would You Like This Map In MC-WAR?

  1. No

    61.5%
  2. It Needs Work

    46.2%
  3. Yes

    7.7%
  4. Too Small

    30.8%
  5. AMAZING

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  1. KingFisher257

    KingFisher257 Member

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    Its A War in The skies! This Is a Small Map With Helicopters, an Airliner, and a Jet. There's not Too Much To Miss By Seeing the Photos... This Map Is Designed For Infect, CTF, and TDM 2016-08-06_11.00.29.png
    map Resized With "Clouds" 2016-08-06_11.00.57.png
    Relocated Red Spawn 2016-08-06_11.01.30.png
    And Poofy Smoke Coming Out of The Reactors (Thanks Theo!)
     

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  2. Jager

    Jager Well-Known Member

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    This map is way too small.
     
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  3. Theo92160_

    Theo92160_ Worldedit's axe > Guns > Swords

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    Here's some criticism:
    - the map is very small, smallest than killhouse as I see, I'll maybe add some fake clouds made out of snow blocks and layers, wool, light grey wool to add some ways to go/to make the map bigger if I was you.

    - it's a decorative aspect, but I'll change the materials of the sandstone plane, and make it odd (11 blocks wide instead of 12) to make it better.

    - add cobwebs on the back of the plane's reactors, everyone loves cobwebs. (smoke effect bro).

    I could easily camp on the top of the plane and triple-nuke by shooting in the void the other team's players who are going to pass on this little wooden bridge, fix that.

    - the plane shape is a little bit... Weird... (sorry if I seem rude).

    -1 for now, but good luck!

    Have a nice day!
     
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    #3 Theo92160_, Aug 5, 2016
    Last edited: Aug 5, 2016
  4. Trogy

    Trogy Huncho

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    The map is definitely way too small sorry.
    And no offense, but it does not look like you put much time into making this.

    Cool idea though
     
  5. KingFisher257

    KingFisher257 Member

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    I am editing it currently... I'm adding some stuff to make it better
     
  6. Theo92160_

    Theo92160_ Worldedit's axe > Guns > Swords

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    Use my suggestions :wink:
     
  7. KingFisher257

    KingFisher257 Member

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    That's what im doing... I'm Keeping The Plane Shape Cause Its my first airliner I've ever built

    There We Go!
     
  8. Theo92160_

    Theo92160_ Worldedit's axe > Guns > Swords

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    nice job, the map is clearly better now, but it stay very, very small
     
  9. KingFisher257

    KingFisher257 Member

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    Hey... They Are Planes... What do You Expect???
     
  10. Flaming_Alpaca

    Flaming_Alpaca Well-Known Member

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    This would be a nightmare for infect. Its unfair. Block variation needed and planes seriously need an overhaul. They are lacking some details.
     
  11. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    I feel like you can shoot from the 1st spawn to the 2nd spawn... also i would like more pics :stuck_out_tongue:
     
  12. NateTheDerp

    NateTheDerp Well-Known Member

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    This map would be a nightmare in my opinion. What if someone like @MR_EVIL_OVERLORD came in with a mini?
     
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  13. MR_EVIL_OVERLORD

    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    I love this idea!

    Here's how I would improve it.

    1) Make it like an air rescue with multiple planes. I think this could expand the size if there were a few.

    2) I would love to see a chopper...if it would fit.

    It would be awesome to make it mimic a scene from a movie where they have to over take a passenger jet in the air...how badass is that!

    Oh, and there needs to be an A10 Warthog with a skull on the back...that would be my jet.
     
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