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Discussion in 'Maps Submissions' started by Kjammi12, Aug 18, 2016.

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  1. Kjammi12

    Kjammi12 Member

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    This map could be good for MC.WAR
     
    #1 Kjammi12, Aug 18, 2016
  2. SkullcrusherLD

    SkullcrusherLD Best-Known GSGer | Ex-War JMod

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    Aha....
    Yeah....
    Especially the big ammount of screenshots are nice! Oh and that beatiful link to download the map! Oh - also build on Creative? - Perfect, we can visit it directly... And that whole description to every part of the map - wonderful. But hey such a nice video, isn't neccessary, but I am pleased you have made one - and that in 360°... Beautiful...
    I guess I vote directly a +1 for that map, in that genius poll, you have added. By the way: The whole map looks extremely detailed and nicely threelined...

    I think you got my point.
    Skully out.
     
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    #2 SkullcrusherLD, Aug 18, 2016
  3. Kjammi12

    Kjammi12 Member

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    sry i failed there
     
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    #3 Kjammi12, Aug 18, 2016
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  4. CAShep

    CAShep Well-Known Member

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    Nice :grinning: +1
     
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    #4 CAShep, Aug 18, 2016
  5. SweetCookiie

    SweetCookiie Cookiie

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    Nicee map +1 :smile:
     
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    #5 SweetCookiie, Aug 18, 2016
  6. GalaxyPandis

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    Nice! +1 :wink:
     
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    #6 GalaxyPandis, Aug 18, 2016
  7. Theo92160_

    Theo92160_ Worldedit's axe > Guns > Swords

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    -1 (sorry if I seem rude on some points, it's nice from you that you did a map for war! :smile:)
    Too small and not very well-builded, I don't want to fight on this map.

    Here's some tips to upgrade it:
    - make it bigger (2/3x as the original size)
    - Change the blocks: Change the Redstone/lapis blocks to something different, randomize some blocks to make a better texture...
    - add it a theme: I don't even know what your build represent.

    Good luck and have a nice day!

    Ps: This map reminds me TestTrip, anyone here like me?
     
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    #7 Theo92160_, Aug 18, 2016
  8. NateTheDerp

    NateTheDerp Well-Known Member

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    I don't know whats so special about this map (not to be rude). Do what @Theo92160_ said, it would make the map much better. -1 for now. :wink:
     
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    #8 NateTheDerp, Aug 18, 2016
  9. Kjammi12

    Kjammi12 Member

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    IM fixing the map guys :grinning:

    Screen Shot 2016-08-19 at 5.46.41 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-19 at 5.57.27 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-19 at 5.57.19 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-19 at 5.56.48 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-19 at 5.46.41 PM.png

    There i fixed it :grinning: vote now plz

    This map for TDM CTF and INF and maybe FFA
     
    #9 Kjammi12, Aug 19, 2016
  10. Lekosa1

    Lekosa1 mineman

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    Looks kinda like rust.

    Add more detail(= block variety) and shelters.

    Also as now, I don't think INF and FFA would fit well because the map is so open+ CTF needs a flag pole.

    For now, -1.
     
    #10 Lekosa1, Aug 19, 2016
  11. Kjammi12

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    it has a flag pole butt no picture
     
    #11 Kjammi12, Aug 19, 2016
  12. NateTheDerp

    NateTheDerp Well-Known Member

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    Do some of this to make the map better:

    - Add things on the outside, it doesnt look good with grass plains past the iron bars
    - Make it not as flat, something people forget when making maps
    - Add more cover/detail, the map is made up of mostly sandstone and has no cover

    Still -1 for now. :wink:
     
    #12 NateTheDerp, Aug 19, 2016
  13. Kjammi12

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    OK guys i fixed it :grinning: here are the pictures

    I'm making another site :grinning:
     
    #13 Kjammi12, Aug 20, 2016
  14. Kjammi12

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    Here are the new pictures Screen Shot 2016-08-20 at 4.13.00 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-20 at 4.13.28 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-20 at 4.13.37 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-20 at 4.13.42 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-20 at 4.13.56 PM.png Screen Shot 2016-08-20 at 4.14.17 PM.png
     
    #14 Kjammi12, Aug 20, 2016
  15. GalaxyPandis

    GalaxyPandis New Member

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    nice map 1+
     
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    #15 GalaxyPandis, Aug 20, 2016
  16. ClayMonster225

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    I like it looks a lot like warhawk in my opinion were it is all open for the most part
     
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    #16 ClayMonster225, Aug 20, 2016
  17. SkullcrusherLD

    SkullcrusherLD Best-Known GSGer | Ex-War JMod

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    I'll go for a +1. Though: You could still add more details.
     
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    #17 SkullcrusherLD, Aug 20, 2016
  18. Kjammi12

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    Guys i switch it its the newest one:grinning:

    NEW thread
     
    #18 Kjammi12, Aug 20, 2016
  19. Kjammi12

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    no this is enough details
     
    #19 Kjammi12, Aug 20, 2016
  20. MR_EVIL_OVERLORD

    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    +1 Nice Map!
     
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    #20 MR_EVIL_OVERLORD, Aug 20, 2016
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