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Denied _MythicalSheep_'s Builder Application

Discussion in 'Denied' started by sheepdude123456, Jan 1, 2017.

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Do you think I qualify to be a part of the Build Team for Brawl?

  1. Yes, you qualify.

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  2. I'm not sure...

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  3. No, you do not qualify. (Please specify why if you select this answer so I know how I can improve)

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  1. sheepdude123456

    sheepdude123456 Member

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    Minecraft Username - My Minecraft username is _MythicalSheep_, however it was previously sheepdude123456 a while back.

    Timezone - I am in Eastern Standard Time (UTC-4:00).

    Would you consider yourself experienced with WorldEdit? Why? - I would say I am very experienced with WorldEdit. I have been using WorldEdit almost ever since I started playing Minecraft, which was in 1.3.2, and I know many of the commands, such as //wand, //sphere, //hsphere, //hcylinder, //cylinder, //rotate, //line, //flip, //set, //replace, //paste, //paste -a, etc.

    Would you consider yourself experienced with VoxelSniper? Why? - I believe I am decently experienced with Voxel, as I also know some of the commands for it, such as /b e melt, /u, /v, /b d, /b vd, /b b, /b 1, /b 2, /b 3, etc. You can see two islands I created with Voxel in the photos.

    How active would you be on Brawl's Build Team? (A couple hours per week, one hour per day, etc.) - I would probably be online around 3-6 hours on weekends and 1-2 hours on weekdays when school starts back up, but times may vary based on how busy I am.

    Why do you want to join Brawl's Build Team? - I have been building on Minecraft even before I started in the computer version, and I started with building character statues in Pocket Edition. Since I have been building for so long, I have a lot of experience with it. I am applying specifically for Brawl since I love the servers, and the members of the community are all really fun to hang out with. I also spend most of my time building on Brawl's MinecraftBuild, and if I am not on Brawl but on Minecraft, I am most likely building somewhere else. I think I have plenty of experience with building and would make a great addition to the team.

    What would you consider your greatest strength with building? (Detailing, Terraforming, Houses, Trees, Statues, etc.) - My greatest strength with building would have to be statues and most 3-D objects. I am also very good with trees.

    What would you consider your greatest weakness with building? (Detailing, Terraforming, Houses, Trees, Statues, etc.) - It's probably terraforming. Though I am not a horrible terraformer, I would definitely say it is my greatest weakness when it comes to building.

    List any previous experience you have with building - As I have already mentioned, I have been building since I started playing Minecraft Pocket Edition before eventually going to the computer version in 1.3.2. I have been building ever since and spend most of my Minecraft time building. I have built player and animal statues, terraforming (though not the best, it's still decent), spawns, hubs, etc. I have built with a build team on a very popular Minecraft server, and I have also built by myself. I used to do mostly pixel arts, but I have grown to do many more 3D builds.

    Pictures: (Include as many pictures of your builds as you can. If you do not include pictures, your application will be automatically denied. When possible, include proof that the builds are your own.) Here are several builds I have made in the past year with the dates and some info on some:
    Click to view imgur album!


    Extra information: In my leisure, I love to play the cello, draw, and hang out with my friends and family in real life. I am a very smart and kind person and enjoy playing on Brawl. I hope you have enjoyed my application for the Build Team! Please feel free to tell me what you think in a reply and through the poll. If you have any constructive criticism for me, please tell me what I can do to improve. If I am accepted for the Team, I would be sure to do my best. However, if I am denied, I would improve on what caused me to be denied, as well as continue playing on Brawl, interacting with the community, and enjoying building. I may even apply again in the future if I think I have improved enough.

    Whether you liked my application or not, I greatly appreciate that you took your time to read it.

    Have a great day,
    ~Mythical
     
    #1 sheepdude123456, Jan 1, 2017
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  2. GalaThundR

    GalaThundR Mcpvp Veteran

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    Could we see more screenshots of actual builds? I see mostly pixel art, player statues, and build battle builds. The guitar looks nice so far assuming you haven't completed it.
    Also, statues and 3-D objects would categorize as Organics.
     
    #2 GalaThundR, Jan 1, 2017
  3. sheepdude123456

    sheepdude123456 Member

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    Oh my goodness, it is not working with me right now. I put in the correct link.

    I have finished the giant cello! It took almost 5 hours 20 minutes to make and was the first one I labelled the times for:
    Click to view imgur album!
     
    #3 sheepdude123456, Jan 1, 2017
  4. Follution

    Follution Well-Known Member

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    -1 needs more structures , also terraforming and etc Like good bushy trees
    Need a lot of improvement, please apply when your skills are good enough to the team

    Also, please don't uploading Pixel art, and more scale, don't do something else that's will not help the build team
     
    #4 Follution, Jan 2, 2017
  5. EddKrumbs

    EddKrumbs Well-Known Member

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    ;; Please don't mind Monster's comment, which is not very constructive. I think you wrote a great application and you seem like a cool and mature person ^^ I would say that your builds do need a little more work, though. It would be nice to see you post builds are more detailed and show that you can build with different themes/styles.
    You should also try to learn some more WE. Commands like //stack, //repl, //drain, //overlay, //move and the //brush 's are all fairly simple to pick up and would help you when you build.
    Overall, I think you need to work on your building, but you have potential. Keep working on it ^^
    by the way your cello is very cool. i can tell you put a lot of effort into it.
     
    #5 EddKrumbs, Jan 2, 2017
  6. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    Agree with this.
    I know you from when i used to be in the munchy build team with you. I would suggest making some more builds such as houses and trees. Pixel art wont get you accepted. I know you said the chello took you 5 hours but if you use w.e like //stack it could have taken less time (idk you might have). I think you have potential but I'd like to see you build a cliff or something with a nice mansion and a park or something like that.

    -0.5 for now.
     
    #6 Daveeeeeeeee, Jan 2, 2017
  7. sheepdude123456

    sheepdude123456 Member

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    Thank you for the feedback, however could you please explain how I need a lot of improvement? You have listed a bit, but it seems you have some other things I need to improve on as well. I would greatly appreciate if you were to please comment again and tell me the rest, that way I can improve as much as needed. Thanks! Also, uploading the pixel art was a mistake, and I got rid of those and replaced with the correct link when it was brought to my awareness.

    Thank you for all these tips and the comments. I'm glad you like the cello! I already knew //drain and forgot about it, though the rest of the commands you mentioned are new to me. I will experiment with them and get a better knowledge of more WorldEdit in general.

    As I mentioned in reply to the first quote, the pixel art upload was a mistake and was removed when it was brought to my attention. //stack is a new command for me, so I will definitely experiment with it for future reference. I will also try making builds based on what you said. Thanks for the advice!
     
    #7 sheepdude123456, Jan 2, 2017
  8. WolfieDaLlama

    WolfieDaLlama Well-Known Member

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    I agree with what people said above. I would like to see more detailed builds and not just statues. I love your application and you seem very mature and nice. If I could see a modern house or something it might change my mind but for now -1. I also loved the Cello you built, looks like you put major effort into it and that's great. Good luck though!
     
    #8 WolfieDaLlama, Jan 2, 2017
  9. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    Hey, i can see that you defently know how to build and shape, i think you're good at pixel art but in my opinion you dont meet the reqs for this build team. Good luck!
     
    #9 Toki_12, Jan 3, 2017
  10. sheepdude123456

    sheepdude123456 Member

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    Oh goodness. Is it still showing the pixel art? I could've sworn I fixed it and that it was working. I am not currently home, so I cannot change it yet since I don't have the link on my phone. I will be home in about an hour and a half, so I will change it then. Sorry for the inconvenience!

    Sorry, it was my cousin's birthday yesterday, so I was really busy and could not fix it when I said I would. However, it does not seem it is needed, as there is not pixel art in there, except the sword and some things such as floors in the Arcade Hub. If you look around the arcade hub, there are 3D figures as well, and the sword in the other photo is in the ground. I only had five minutes to build that one, so I couldn't do too much. If this qualifies as a lot of pixel art and not enough of things the build team wants, then I don't know what to say. :confused: Are those what were being mentioned, or is it not showing the correct album to everyone else for some odd reason? The correct album also includes the islands, tree, and less pixel art.
     
    #10 sheepdude123456, Jan 4, 2017
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  11. Follution

    Follution Well-Known Member

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    Good luck, also please upgrade ur name forums account

    I like ur Gaint Gello
     
    #11 Follution, Jan 4, 2017
  12. Jaemzs

    Jaemzs Ex-Build Team Member

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    I think you have a ways to go before becoming a builder. Your builds seem quite plain, so please try and add some detail to make your builds pop. Good luck your your future applications! -1
     
    #12 Jaemzs, Jan 4, 2017
  13. Mr_BlueSheep

    Mr_BlueSheep [Professional Sheep since 2012]

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    I would like to see:
    Some more Terraforming.

    Houses:
    1. Medieval
    2. Modern
    3. Suburban

    Ps: I like your giant cello

    +0
     
    #13 Mr_BlueSheep, Jan 7, 2017
  14. DeadRhos

    DeadRhos Minimum Brain Size

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    Hi sheep! As others have said, pixel art, player statues and build battles aren't really what we're looking for. I'd like to see a lot more big projects: giant buildings, interesting colours and shapes, terraforming - that sort of thing. Have a look at some of the accepted applications to get an idea of what I'm talking about. The cello's a good start.

    In the meantime, build build build. Take inspiration from real life, or have a look on planetminecraft or /r/minecraft. You've got a way to go yet, and you won't get there without a few good months of practice. Good luck!

    Denied
     
    #14 DeadRhos, Jan 7, 2017
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