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Story Pretending to be awake isn't always good - Short Story Horror

Discussion in 'Literature' started by KiwiDwarf, May 29, 2017.

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  1. KiwiDwarf

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    A young boy is sleeping in his bed on a usual night. He hears footsteps outside his door and peeks out of his eyes to see what is happening. His door swings open quietly to reveal a murderer carrying the corpses of his parents. After silently propping them up on a chair, he writes something on the wall in the blood of the dead bodies. He then hides under the child's bed.

    The child is scared beyond belief. He can’t read the writing on the wall and he knows the man is under his bed. Like any child, he pretends that he slept through the whole thing and hasn’t awoken yet. He lays still as the bodies, quietly hearing the breaths from under his bed.

    An hour passes, and his eyes are adjusting more and more to the darkness. He tries to make out the words, but it’s a struggle. He gasps when he finally makes out the sentence.

    “I know you’re awake”. He feels something shift underneath his bed. suddenly he spots the black figure, the young boy scream with all energy he had left,

    the boy wasn't found, but you can hear the screeches from a mile away.

    KiwiDwarf
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    ............Would have been cooler if the little boy was the more terrifying monster. = )

    After killing the boys parents the monster kidnaps the boy, preparing to have him for desert.

    Hours later, the monster boils a large pot, so that he can eat the boy.

    He prepares to boil the boy alive when he notices the boys eyes changing color.

    The full moon passes overhead as the monster admires the moonlight.

    He looks back at the boy and watches as he transforms into a werewolf...

    The boys large screams become a roar as he pulverizes the monster and rips his limbs a part...
     
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    Thank you, I will have more
     
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    And the boy rips the monsters arm off and beats him with it....yeah, that would be cool.
     
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