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Showcase Requesting Critiques!

Discussion in 'MinecraftBuild' started by Nucroese, Nov 22, 2017.

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  1. Nucroese

    Nucroese New Member

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    I got inspired by some pictures, so I made this house kind of thing. I was wondering if anyone could critique or give some tips.
     

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  2. Ice_Bear1

    Ice_Bear1 Well-Known Member

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    Ice Bear thinks it looks fine the shape is varied enough but some parts look especially plain. Ice Bear also recommends adding stairs and railings for the deck. Ice Bear says that asides from the house itself you can add some landscaping.
     
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  3. Fordale

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    It has great shape but could use a little more detail. Its a great start!
     
  4. Doges

    Doges Ex-Mod, Ex-Builder

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    I would focus on adding some more detail first and foremost.

    Specifically, here, you should add something to spice it up. Add a window, pot holder, or anything really. These two windows also need some work to them and look kind of awkward, make them a bit smaller perhaps. Ditch the glowstone or make it into a bit better lamp. I'd also make an entry from the ground.

    Also, because you're building a "jungle" style thing, add some leaves, and other jungle related stuff around the structure. Something like these leaves around the house -- play around with different jungle related combinations.
     
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  5. iamdroone

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    Looks nice. Detail may be something you should focus on more on this build specifically.
     
  6. Catifies

    Catifies archers suck

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    This needs detail and a much larger pallet.

    Its still really cool tho, And i would love to live there!
     
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