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Mc-War chronicles: The Old Era [Chapter 1]

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  1. SoMuchWinning

    SoMuchWinning Well-Known Member

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    Mc-War chronicles: The Old Era
    Chapter 1- The fall of FLUX

    It was a different time, and a different enemy. Multiple groups of elite soldiers were approaching remains of what was left of FLUX. After the entire country turned into a civil war, one side were conservative FLUX rebels, other side was the newly created faction, called The Royal Army. It gained a lot of power very quickly, a lot of elite soldiers. During first week, the fights begun all over the country. FLUX rebels were killed, one by one. Their last outpost, commanded by their greatest warlord, rockerboy, had prepared its defences. They held for 4 months under a siege, until TRA broke the walls apart. Nearly all of the soldiers were killed from FLUX side, but few managed to escape. Before the battle, rockerboy told his general, thebmanswan541, to drop a nuke after all defenses would be fallen. And it happened, lots of TRA soldiers died, but mostly it was rebels. General rockerboy went missing in action, along with his officers, however, after 3 days of running and being chased, most of the FLUX soldiers joined other factions, who were ruling other parts of the country. Rest stood and fought, until last of them were gone. Some are still hiding, holding their skullcrushers, counting the bullets in Isolators, and sharpening their knives. One day they will return, but as a different enemy, much stronger, slightly more menacing.
    TRA thought that they had destroyed FLUX. But suddenly, 40 of rockerboy's greatest soldiers, rose out of the ruins and killed twice as many enemies. They were hunting the remains of TRA, but after a Division of TRA, commanded by general mafiaferret, arrived, 40 were caught down to 5 in few days. 4 of the FLUX soldiers stood and fought, and they told another to escape and carry a message of their greatness, about the things that had happened, but was now gone. After 4 were left, they fought till their last skullscrusher bullets, after they ran out of ammo, they used their blades, and when they ran out of blades, they used their hands. In the dawn, all of them were killed, except for one. He was found in the desert, crippled, wounded, and crawling. TRA soldiers showed no mercy, they believed that there were more, and trying to get the answers, they were torturing the soldier for 3 days. On fourth day he was gone, and 29 dead bodies of the guards were found. It was him, and searching for a place, he found my small house. After he told me this story, he died, and rest of words were lost. But there were still more, waiting for their final stand....

    -End of chapter 1.
     
  2. cplime321

    cplime321 Active Member

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    Tbh this wouldn't be an old Mcwar era. It is actually fairly recent. Maybe you should do like a flashback of the fall of NEX. Anyway, the story is AMAZING and the description is just great.
     
  3. freakiziod123

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    I spy so me ghost.
     
  4. SoMuchWinning

    SoMuchWinning Well-Known Member

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    Well, I lack knowledge of NEX, but I might consider doing a flashback. I am now planning into doing Ch. 1 pt.2 and And then I will start Chapter 2 after the update.
     
  5. marcel18167

    marcel18167 Well-Known Member

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    dude....
    really....
    dont want to start with: day one orange made a server!
     
  6. SoMuchWinning

    SoMuchWinning Well-Known Member

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    *One day chaploo made a server :V
     
  7. lolaholic

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    I can tell you all about the first server :grinning:
     
  8. SoMuchWinning

    SoMuchWinning Well-Known Member

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    I know stuff about that :V
    I write about things happening in the end of the last year. Just so that nobody would be like: "wtf is nex?" or "wtf is ban or PURE?"
     
  9. MrCowlick

    MrCowlick Well-Known Member

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    *Sigh* Yet another rip off of If Mc-War was a school, although this one is very good.
     
  10. Lord_Roke

    Lord_Roke Forever the Forums Watchdog
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    Well, thats not really old.
    I experienced the introduction of clans, and FLUX has been created in may.
     
  11. Sir_Blockalots

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    Similarities noticed.
     
  12. MrCowlick

    MrCowlick Well-Known Member

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    Well done, Detective Blockalots!
     
  13. SoMuchWinning

    SoMuchWinning Well-Known Member

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    ikr, that's where I got the inspiration. Pretty epic, still....
     
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