Complete River Ruins

Looks nice. Make sure you also submit your map here.

 

People generally post them on the forums to get feedback, @LennyFace

@November I'like give the optimized version a look when I get home.

 

I know, that's why I gave him feedback. ^-^

 

Not symmetrical in both directions and doesn't seem that small.
Yet I still like it.

 

Considering you built this in just a few hours, I r8 10/10

 

Sorry, I forgot I was going to give feedback.

• You added mot of a middle section, which is nice. However, there's not much cover from archers. Maybe add some custom trees or little ruins around the lake.
• The flagroom is a huge improvement, but it still can be blocked off easily, since both entrances are basically the same. I would advise three entrances, one from the left, one from the right, and one from the middle. Maybe one of them can start on the top of the hill.
• There are four flags you built on the map. None of them have any way to get up there without a wall-climb ability. Although it is easily head-shottable, there is still no way for people to get up on top of the flags. I would advise adding sponges to improve access to these flags.
• All the trees looks the same. They are small, and do not add to the map very much. If I were you, I would make my own trees. It will not only add to the look of the map, but it will aid in gameplay if you make the trees larger, as I think you should.
• At some point, I remember you mentioning that you wanted the gameplay to mimic Blackout. I love the gameplay of Blackout; it's one of my favorite maps. However, I don't feel this would achieve the same gameplay as Blackout. Blackout is an offense-oriented map; you rarely see defensive standoffs on Blackout. However, this map is defense-oriented. If you would like to have similar gameplay to Blackout, add more entrances to the flagroom. Also. a sponge or two wouldn't hurt.

Overall, an awesome map! Nice job c:

 

D: build is down (!?!?!?)

looks hella kewl from the screenies tho m@

 

Really small map just by looking at the screenshots (Looks about maybe 150x100? 200x100?;-;
Uhh hmm...

Not much detail, seems pretty bland (I would put more diversity in your map with various blocks such as different types of wood, sand, wool, clay, etc. Don't make it simply exclusive to basic oak, and different types of stone.)

Where exactly is flag...?


I can see it in this picture, but I would go back and change the flag to say
"HEY, THE FLAG IS HERE, THIS IS WHERE YOU GO, THIS IS CTF, RIGHT HERE!"
So yeah. That. But I don't recommend turning the flag room into a big blob of red/blue.

Maybe add some paths throughout the map? Say from one spawn to another, a few bridges here and there, and definitely one to the flag. No offense, but I completely missed the picture of flag room (Because I didn't know it was the flag room xD)

Good luck! This map has a lot of potential, just try to make it a bit lengthier I suppose.... Or have a big underground to make up for the maps small size.

 

I like this map as a fast gameplay/high mobility one! Hopefully we can finally get rid of blackout and whiteout, when this one gets accepted.

 

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It looks a bit small, which may be trouble for ninja cappers?
Considering you can cover a lot of ground in one enderpearl.