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Complete Grandwood River

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by Dokkeboi, Aug 6, 2015.

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  1. Dokkeboi

    Dokkeboi Guest

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    CTF Map Submission
    Hey everyone!! It's Foxy_Dokke!! So I tried to create one more map, and it turned out more successful than I thought.
    Map Name: Grandwood River
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    Creator(s): @Foxy_Dokke, @Sporty_The_Cutie
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    Download: MCBuild Id: 259326

    Special thanks to
    @Birdgirl for helping with the flipping part
    @Sporty_The_Cutie for helping me with the map
    @LordCh4os for teleporting to me when I told him to
    @PumpkinTerrorist for hiding in the map
    @Chhimichanga for chatting in the map
    @//setbiome swampland for being a useless command
     
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    #1 Dokkeboi, Aug 6, 2015
  2. SoCool21

    SoCool21 Bans Reports & Appeals Admin | McPvPer for Life <3

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    First impressions are good, its a good looking map and there's no immediate issues. It looks slightly too large, but it should be fine, its not drastically large or anything.

    The flagroom is far from bad, but I've seen better. It looks rather small, and you can headshot the flag. Also, water outside the flagroom hasn't seemed to work in the past (for example, Islands). It should be fine as long as you can get out the water quickly. Finally, it'd be best to add a sponge or a ladder up to the roof of the flagroom so soldiers can't camp up there. Overall, its pretty good, better than a lot of the flagrooms in the rotation right now.

    The spawn is a good distance away from the flagroom, which is good - the only flaw is it only has 1 exit. An engineer from the other team could place his turret there and make it harder to escape. Add another entrance and it should be good enough.

    As for the rest of the map, it looks good. Archer might be slightly overpowered, but apart from that gameplay is near-flawless. Add a tiny bit more cover and it'll be perfect.

    One of the best maps I've seen, and definitely the best I've seen submitted for Brawl. 9/10, it'll be great to play on but there's tiny problems here and there. Fix those and it'll be perfect, good luck.
     
    #2 SoCool21, Aug 6, 2015
  3. Dokkeboi

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    It's 101x261 I think so it's not too large
     
    #3 Dokkeboi, Aug 6, 2015
  4. SoCool21

    SoCool21 Bans Reports & Appeals Admin | McPvPer for Life <3

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    IIRC the biggest recommended was 250x250, so its a bit long but its fine.
     
    #4 SoCool21, Aug 6, 2015
  5. MrWaffleman

    MrWaffleman The negligence of time's end is man's downfall

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    It looks pretty good to me, but I think a red flag and a blue flag isn't really enough to make the two sides stand out... there needs to be more red/blue. Also the block variation is nice, but it looks very dull to be honest. I like the concept and all, I just can't get to the root of the problem though... +0 for now.
     
    #5 MrWaffleman, Aug 6, 2015
  6. Flavorous

    Flavorous the help

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    The maximum is 300x300 and minimum of 100x100. Anywhere in between should be fine.
     
    #6 Flavorous, Aug 6, 2015
  7. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    Lol I didn't rlly help too much but thx 4 D tag :grinning:
     
    #7 Daveeeeeeeee, Aug 6, 2015
  8. Scarpa_

    Scarpa_ Active Member

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    Looks nice, and appears to have good gameplay (although the flag room could use some fixing). I would add a little more archer cover in those areas with bridges/rivers. Otherwise +1.
     
    #8 Scarpa_, Aug 6, 2015
  9. Dokkeboi

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    I have redesigned the flag room to something else.

    Note: I thought of making the map like a park where people can visit, buy souvenirs and experience the beautiful river.
     
    #9 Dokkeboi, Aug 7, 2015
  10. Compositions

    Compositions Well-Known Member

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    Wow! This is great. Definitely think it should be added. Keep up the great work
     
    #10 Compositions, Aug 7, 2015
  11. xxMineSheepxx

    xxMineSheepxx baaaahh

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    Wow this is quite neat +1, just work on the gameplay as socool stated above
     
    #11 xxMineSheepxx, Aug 7, 2015
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