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W.I.P. Nara Twin Temples

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  1. Champloo

    Champloo Guest

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    CTF Map Submission

    Map Name: Nara Twin Temples
    Style: Japanese temple style
    Creator(s): Dwarfiest / Pyrotheum

    This is the first CTF map I've ever made, so feedback / criticism is welcome.

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    Download: Map ID: 372410
     

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    #1 Champloo, Apr 30, 2017
  2. oFire

    oFire Well-Known Member

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    Damn it feels like you're pumping out builds like crazy! Nice build :smile:
     
    #2 oFire, Apr 30, 2017
  3. Diversities

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    First off, the map itself looks really beautiful. Great job with that! My main problem with this map, though, is the lack of space between the red and blue base. This means that any Ninja who's interested in ghost capping would be able to do so relatively fast. Also, are both the flag room and spawning area located in the same structure? If so, maybe you could make them in separate areas to add some length to the map.
     
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    #3 Diversities, Apr 30, 2017
  4. Champloo

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    Thank you! Yes, the distance isn't as big as the other maps, but that is mainly because the buildings itself are quite big. I forgot to make a screenshot of the spawn room (Silly me), but yes, the spawn room is above the flag room. The distance between spawn and flag room is about the same as other maps on CTF. You can check the map on Build if you'd like, I might make the distance between the 2 buildings bigger depending on the critique from players.

    Thanks!
     
    #4 Champloo, Apr 30, 2017
  5. Toki_12

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    Very Noice!
     
    #5 Toki_12, Apr 30, 2017
  6. Champloo

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    Tank you!
     
    #6 Champloo, Apr 30, 2017
  7. Xelasi

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    Hey! Okay, I'm finally going through maps and am giving feedback before we run out of time; staff is starting to look at stuff for the next wave.

    This map has gorgeous builds on it, but there are some really big gameplay issues on it. This still says WIP and I'm not sure how interested you are in continuing work on this. But here are things I'm seeing.

    Spawn drops directly into the flagroom. This makes assassin respawning really annoying to deal with. I like that you can take stairs down, but if you could block it off to where people don't drop straight down into the flagroom it would help with that issues. If you could also add additional exits (maybe doorways sponging forward out of the front of the building) from spawn it could help. I like that the stairs wrap around to either side of the flagroom.
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    Maybe block off all of the tops of these walls where it's open and soldiers can keep hopping. This map is already structurally tall at the flag room, so soldiers will have an advantage regardless. And watch out for details that can enable soldiers to camp within the flagroom itself, or have ways for other classes to reach them.
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    I'm concerned about archers camping on the top of the buildings with how open mid is, but it might help counter the soldier issue a bit. Also, non-soldiers are likely to get funneled right here, there are only 3 non-climbing ways around the walls. Maybe lower the walls?
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    If anything, I'd highly recommend fixing the assassin dropdown and soldier problems in the flagroom first. Hope this helps.
     
    #7 Xelasi, Jun 21, 2017
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  8. Champloo

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    Thanks for the tips, I'll make sure to work on it.
    And btw I did make a [Complete] post of this map, https://www.brawl.com/threads/66694/
     
    #8 Champloo, Jun 21, 2017
  9. Xelasi

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    Ah, didn't realize this was a duplicate.

    Locked.
     
    #9 Xelasi, Jun 21, 2017
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