Complete New CTF map (Sky of War)

Looooool EPIC !!!!!!!!!

 

first of all: What are those round blue things?
Second of all: Can you show us some more screenshots?

 

I checked this map out and it looks really nice. Just one screenshot doesn't do justice, show some more!

 

Hey there this map is OK. The details aren't great and I doubt the gameplay will be either. I'm sry but my -1

 

The floating target-thingies are kinda Soldier OP, though they look really cool. The map in general looks somewhat Air Ballons-esque and Archer OP. I'd suggest solutions, but I feel like that's just unavoidable for this style of map. It looks amazing, though.

 

this map looks like an airballoons remake tbh.
but other than that the map looks nice but i wouldn't play on it cus archers.

 

I am not in any way trying to judge, though, but this map would look cool a year or two ago. When there weren't
many abusers of classes, (like archer and soldier,) and the mid-evil/nether block and cobblestone theme was actually acceptable. People now days are just making that same theme over and over with lava and mid-evil structures and it is really boring me and making me mad. I'd personally like to see diversity over the new maps.

 

As my critique,
I'm not really sure how I feel about this map. (I'm going to point out big problems with the map, sorry if I don't point out the good things about it, but the problems are outweighing the good here.)
- Oddly, there isn't exactly a description of the map.
- Then, what are those little blue target-looking things floating above the islands? To prevent headshots? "Teleportals"?
- You need water under the spawn, you do take damage from falling. This is a CTF map, not a parkour map. Please fix this, and add railing so you can't get knocked off my mages, engineers could easily camp this too.

This Island is really crowded, maybe replace trees on islands with "Man-Made" barriers sufficient enough to prevent Engineer camps and headshots?


There are literally only 2 entrances into the flag room, hello? Oh and remove the TNT, a pyro can ignite that.
You can easily get knocked off this bridge, please put railing on it (and some sort of basic roofing, you can headshot this easily.)
Uhh there are only 2 ways to get from one side of the map to the other...? More narrow bridges? Islands connecting the two? I understand this tank looking thing is aesthetic be it really gets in the way of the gameplay. Mostly the cobwebs.



I understand this is probably your first map, but I'm trying to give you some pointers here.
CTF is really new to BRAWL, so I think you may want to get a feel for more of the CTF experience and gameplay before going and making maps.

My recommendation is that you play CTF for maybe another month or two, then come back and work on your map and see all the possible careless errors you may have made.

~N

 

Gameplay on this map would be terrible

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Just saying, I've seen this guy from Mcpvp, so I think he's been playing for a while.

 

That may be, but the maps gameplay would, and I'm going to be brutally honest, quite poor. I think people collectively covered exactly why.

 

I'm just stating that he's not a newbie. He needs to work on mapmaking, though. First time's always the hardest.

 

I checked this map out on Build, and, unfortunately, the issues with the map make it un-fixable. I'm sorry, but maps like these can't get excepted.

• The narrow, open walkways with no railings make it very easy for engineers, mages, or archers to completely control the walkways.
• The limited amount of routes across the map make it very difficult to cross it, especially since the routes are very easily controlled.
• The flagroom needs to be totally redone. It is too small, enclosed, and only has two entrances.
• Many other issues were mentioned above.

So, overall, when I say un-fixable, it doesn't necessarily mean you can;t fic the issues, it just means the map will lose it's feeling if you do. It would be a lot of work to fix it, but I hope you do! It looks really neat! As always, if you need help with guidance or suggestions revolving around maps, feel free to PM me.

 

-1 no explanation needed.... .-.

 

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