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I would like to request you read this piece of a story I am writing first but you don't have to. I have only just started writing around this and haven't refined and detailed yet. Any suggestions or tips would be much appreciated.

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On their way out of the building someone shot SJ with a tranquilizer. The riot team had already arrived and SJ began feeling drowsy. He decided he would be dead weight for the group if he passes out. Larry moved to help him, but SJ pushed him away and told everyone to leave.


“I will stall them before I pass out. If anything happens I won’t say a word. Just don’t forget about me”. The group could hear shouting nearby and left. As much as it hurt SJ was right and they needed more time. When the riot team found SJ he was knocked out cold on the floor. They cuffed him and threw him into a van that drove off. When he woke up he was still in the van. It felt like it had been a long time already and through the back window he could tell it was night time. Maybe hours later the van stopped. Men looking like armored guards pulled SJ out and injected something into him. He started feeling drowsy all over again. This drug was much stronger than the last and SJ barely made out the silhouette of a prison before he passed out. After he woke up there were guards standing around and one man who looked like he was in charge. The man in charge stood over SJ and began to speak.


“Hello there, I am your warden here at this prison. I would hate to call you a number so tell me, what is your name?”


“I won’t tell you anything!” shouted SJ.


“Oh, in time, you will say everything” replied the warden.


SJ wasn’t talked to anymore and after a day he was moved to a cell block with other people. There was one other person inside his new cell.


“Hi, my name’s John, I’ve been so lonely in here by myself. I just got here today and still have no idea what’s going on. I never committed any crimes and just got abducted and put here.”


SJ hesitated to say his name but in the end he couldn’t resist. John seemed to friendly to ignore. “My names SJ, and I don’t know what’s going on either”. The guards walked away from the cells and climbed a ladder onto a long metal walkway. The stood with their guns aimed at prisoners and moment later the main door opened.


The warden entered and began his speech. “Attention everyone! When your cell doors open please take one step out and face your cell. If you try to move or look around you will face the consequences.” announced the warden. When the cells opened everyone followed the orders and entered some strange building. Inside they were all crowded around and gas started falling from the ceiling.


“Are they going to kill us right after we got here?” asked John.


“No, that seems pointless, there is something else going on here.” said SJ. Slowly everyone passed out from the gas and were transported to an underground section of the prison. When they woke up SJ quickly studied his surroundings. They were in a long hallway with rooms down each end. One side ended with another wall and the other seemed to turn a corner.


“Today we will be played a little game I like to call Hide and Seek. The rules to this game of Hide and Seek are as follows. You will not try to escape this prison. You will not fight the guards. You will be one of the final five prisoners to win. If you break any of these rules then you will be shot on sight. That includes being found.” announced the warden. Everyone was shocked and whispering started everywhere.


“There is a sign that says armory down the hall, maybe we should group up and rush that spot or take down a few guards quickly. You know what they say, strength in numbers right?” said John.


SJ thought about the options and decided he would obey the orders and not take any risks yet. “I don’t want to risk anything yet so I am going to go hide. The guards were finally almost gone as they turned the corner down the hallway. After the last guard was out of sight people began moving toward the room labeled armory.


“That’s a shame, well good luck to you then, I’m going with everyone else” said John.


“Good luck to you too, I wish we could have met outside this prison” replied SJ right before he turned around and walked away. John and the majority of the prisoners had gone into the armory while SJ and a few others went to find somewhere to hide. SJ went into the second to last room before the dead end. Inside he saw some lockers, cabinets, tables, and chairs. The lockers seemed too obvious to hide in so SJ climbed into the smallest possible cabinet he could fit in. After being cramped inside for a while he heard a siren go off. Gun shots immediately followed and SJ thought the rebelling prisoners would actually be able to escape. When the gunshots finally stopped, SJ got extremely nervous waiting. He was just about to open the cabinet when he heard a door slam open and many gun shots fire nearby. It sounded like someone inside the room may have been returning fire. SJ feared the guards might have won the battle. An intercom broke the suspense.


“SJ, congratulations on winning Hide and Seek even though your win came in an unusual way. I think you will be delighted to know how I learned your name. Come out of hiding now or we will kill you when you’re found. SJ left his cabinet and exited the room. The hallway outside was a disaster. Bodies of prisoners and guards lined the hall and SJ walked passed the room where gunshots were last heard. It looked like a rebel ran in and exposed the people hiding. The guards killed everyone inside. SJ continued down the hall until he was escorted by guards to another section of the prison. The room he was left in had a table with food lined out on top. He was instructed to sit down and after filling up he passed out. The next day he was forced to watch a game while dressed as an unarmed guard. The game he watched was called box game and SJ made sure to note every detail of it. At the end of the game he was drugged again and woke back up in his cell. More prisoners filled the cells again and SJ felt sick from the thought of what was to happen. He went through the entire process again, but without someone to talk to like John. The game he had to play this time was climb. Through much struggle he managed to win and was taken back to the same room with food on the table. He ate slower and before finishing the warden walked in.


“Hello there SJ, I never told you how I learned your name. I met this lovely prisoner named John who was always with you. He was caught trying to rebel against me and I offered to spare his life. He gladly accepted my terms and gave your name right before I shot him in the head. SJ jumped up and dove at the warden. The warden backed up and SJ hit the floor where he passed out again. The next day he was given a luxury isolation cell where he was able to workout and pass the time. Inside the cell was a list of rules he had to follow. SJ memorized all of them and eventually was moved back to the main cell block a week later. There was someone else in the cell but SJ ignored him. The sound of the main door opening came into his cell and he stood up.