W.I.P. Industrial

Haven't had a look in game but please take the pictures in default or a more default looking texture pack.

 

The resource pack the pictures are in don't really matter and this texture pack doesn't even make much of a difference anyways. You are still able to make out important structures and details with them.

After checking out the map I have a lot of critiques to say, both minor and major ones.

Minor Critiques:
The flagroom as a whole is fleshed out well and is a good design. However the hole in the ceiling right above the flag needs to go. Just completely remove it, don't even think about putting it somewhere else, just get rid of it imo.

The sponges at mid that cross the river make the bridges completely useless, they should be removed.

All of the trees need to be fleshed out a lot more. Planting a sapling and bonemealing it just doesnt work anymore :/

Major Critiques:
The entire underground system needs to be removed. The fact of the matter is is that you can travel from the enemy team's base to your base entirely underground, and that is not okay. I know it sucks to hear because I bet it took a while to make but what can you do. However I do think you should keep the underground part under the bridge, therefore offering a good alternative path for archer coverage. The entire underground system isn't needed tho.

The back hills need to be pushed up against the back of the main building. Before you begin to flesh this part out, it's size needs to be reduced. It's kind of just dead space.

That's all the advice I can think to give you. Hope it helps sooshie <3

 

Aesthetically all maps should in theory should be designed for the default texture pack, if a map is designed to look aesthetically pleasing in another pack that doesn't look too much like the default one, it could lead to bad aesthetics in the default one which is the one the majority of people use. I am also unable to differentiate between certain blocks as I don't know their textures, e.g the wood could be spruce or dark oak. However, it isn't a big deal.