Complete Dust Bowl I (Updated)

I like the map, I like the desert theme on this map

 

Cool map, but I think the aesthetics need some improvement. The buildings in general look quite plain - if you added a different variety of blocks (e.g give the buildings a wooden frame, or wool over the roof), it'd make a big difference. They also look a bit blocky - adding more depth to some of the houses like this one would fix it.


The back of spawn looks a bit meh, I think if you continue the wool so it hangs over the side, it'd look fine.


Also, I think the terrain could be improved. The map is flat, with some hills on the side and some piles of sand, which looks kinda unnatural. Try and change the terrain throughout the entire map.

I agree with this - it also makes the map far more open, and I'd expect it'll be quite difficult to cross these rivers if archers are shooting at you. Some alternate routes, like a tunnel or cave going underneath the river, would improve this.

Finally, I'm a little concerned about the flagroom:


It'd be very easy as defence to just knock any would-be capper into the corner, making it very difficult to escape the flag. The best solution to this would be adding another exit, but that would be a lot of exits for such a small flagroom. It may be worth making the flagroom better (and removing the entrance from the roof, to give defence a bit of an easier time).

Also, the flagroom is quite easy to headshot, from this angle:



Overall, I do quite like this map. It needs some improvements IMO but I think this has the potential to be a solid rotation map.