Story A HACK Adventure

Ello Brawlers, I've decided to write a small story in memory of the ol' HACK, as well as all the HACKers I've ment. In the story, FLUX is used as the enemy (No offense to FLUX or any FLUX members, I just needed a good clan ) This story is written from my point of view. Enjoy! (If you are personally offended by any by any part please notify me)

There I sat, in the midst of a ruined metropolis, shrouded in darkness, debris and ashes had long buried the destroyed and lost remains of Myortvyelia, now an isolated place. My orange fur was no longer recognizable, it had turned a sorrow brown. I fell to my knees as I could no longer walk on my beaten paws. I fell, and everything turned brown.
I awakened to the pressence of @ZapCrusher , his derpy eyes looking into mine. "Better now, scrub?" he asked. "Your lucky @BrawlerAce_ had run off to try and find wi-fi, or else you would have been left to rot. How ya doin'?"
"Fine", I asked. I looked around, it seemed as if I were in some sort of bunker. "Where am I, and is anyone else here?" I asked Zap.
"Why, your in the last surviving bunker in the world, and, who else is here you ask? Why any other person in HACK, mate."
"Could you still tell me what kinda nuke blew up Brawlopolis? I don't remember anything..." I asked, as @bedrock88 came in, elated to see I was awake.
" Glad to see you up again, Fox. Wondering what happened ? Well, little by little, zombies had ate up the town, everyone disappeared, and by the time we got back from Puttyville, FLUX had already blown the place up. We found no survivors, except for you".
"Well, this wasn't a good time to wake up , Foxy, we're leaving tomorrow", commented Zap
"Where???" I asked, everything was happening so soon.
"Why, we're gonna go and get our negotiations with those FLUXers, they have destroyed our home. And speaking of leaving, we're gonna need every HACKer left in Brawl (the planet) if we're gonna show them a lesson. Now, let's get you suited up and ready for tomorrow. bedrock's gonna get you ready".
I got up, and followed bedrock.
I opened my eyes from a short sleep, the day had come. I got in my War uniform, and headed for the main hangar, where HACK's journey for it's revenge was to begin. I walked in, happy at the site of of @Greedy_Bee , along side @Sonic_owl .I looked around, amazed to see my favorite people- @mebmatt , @ShmolikzDJ , @tdaddy14 , and @mack211 ,standing quiet but strong. There were others, as well @starbo1034 , Brawler_Ace_, @Mark711 , @ninjacat20 , and many more. After a brief 2 minutes, Zap, had come up and asked for HACK's attention.
"Alright m8, simple and clear description. We're gonna go and have a talk with those FLUX scrubs, or more specifically, negotiations, but with guns >".
There was a roar of applaud, but suddenly, @jaydenchadd came rushing in. " @BorN_Adderr is gone! She's been kidnapped by FLUX! They left an M9 in her room! We gotta save her!" he exclaimed.
Out of no-where, came the legend, the leader, @meltingangel , with a slight grin on his face. "Then why wait any further? Let's go, HACK". With no more questions asked, we all got our skull-crushers, pythons, usp45's, L120_Isolator's, Grenades, Molotov's, C4, and tomahawks, we opened the hangar, and off we went, into the desert of debree.

For days we walked through the rough terrain of the Scoat peeks, but the sharp ills were no match for melt's incredible leadership. Within a week, the first step had been taken into FLUXer soil. My paw felt burned when I had felt the heated soil of FLUXer territory.
We approached a hill, and for a moment, the sun brightened behind us, the wind blew our faces, and we all stood in a row, beind melt.
“So are we gonna get to sleep?” asked Zap
“ Will you just shut up and make this an epic movie scene, ya scrub??” replied BrawlerAce_. Shamed, Zap turned back toward the FLUXer land.
After a brief moment of total epicness, a sudden bullet flew past Shmolikz. “We’ve been spotted.” Said mebmatt.
“The time has come then We charge into their hideout, and we save BorN” added melt, “just remember one thing on your way down there”, said melt. Everyone looked at him, waiting. “Just don’t get shot.” We all looked forward, toward the crowd of FLUXers coming at us, and we all loaded and reloaded our weapons.
Then, we charged into spray of bullets. The FLUXers showed resistance, but not enough for tdaddy’s usp45 skills, or Greedy_Bee’s strong moddel 1887, or Sonic_Owl’s python. One by one, the front line of FLUX weakened, and just as they began to retreat, meltingangel had launched a grand EMP. No FLUXer could see, they were left to scramble. “Let them live,” instructed melt, “Only reply with gunfire if they shoot you, let’s run for the entrance”, he added. We all sprinted toward the gates. Whew, the first wave passed, with no casualties I looked down to my tail… wait… where did my tail go?! Those FLUXers… I grew enraged.
“Alright, mebmatt, where are we heaeded?” asked melt.
“ All we gotta do is take a left , pass their 4th hanger, take a right, and we will be at mafia’s chamber”.
“Lead us” said melt. Within seconds, we were already in the hanger, and as the EMP came to an end, the gunfire resumed. I shot my fifth FLUXer, and found some ammunition in my pack. As we neared the hangar door, I heard a slight howl of pain behind me. “ninjacat!” I exclaimed. He laid in the ground, square puddles of blood in his leg. “I need to stay!” I exclaimed
“Listen, foxy, we’re gonna need as many of us as we can, it’s only a group of us versus one of Brawl’s biggest, strongest clans. We can’t afford to loose anyone else.”
“Go, I’ll distract them” said ninjacat.
I took one last look, and ran for the hangar door. We all barely made it. A short distance from us we could see an entrance to a chamber. “Alright, make sure you’re fully reloaded and ready for some negotiating” said Zap. We all rushed for the giant entrance that lay ahead. As I walked through an entrance, a giant room came into view, with one, thick path, surrounded by an abyss. Ahead lay the mighty leader of the FLUXers, Mafiaferret, along with @Queen_Shine .
“I didn’t think you’d make it this far, my soldiers were trained well. I congratulate you, but your achievement has come to it’s limit.
“We’re not leaving this place until we get BorN, and you pay for the destruction of our homes” demanded Zap.
“Why should I?” asked mafia. “It is you HACKers who invaded Region one. OUR region! You kicked us out and left us in region 5, which stinked! You took our land long ago, and if we can’t have it back, then no-one should have it!”
“FLUX was never welcome in the first place, mafia, we were called upon to occupy Region One. You were being a tyrant” said BrawlerAce_.
“It doesn’t matter anymore, here, take your dang friend BorN” said mafia. An iron trap door had been opened, and BorN came falling down. She was sick.
“Now, let’s get down to your fates. Melting, I ust admit, ou hae been an indeed decent Brawler, but I believe that has come to an end. Surrender, and I’ll only keep you in my own prison, under good care”.
“Not even on my desert eagle, no” replied melt.
“Fine”, said mafia. “Then face the full force of FLUX, have fun watching HACK fall to it’s knee’s. Out of all places, FLUXers appeared, crossbows, miniguns, LAW’s, and automatics surrounded us.
“ Listen up, HACK. We might be out gunned, or we may not have such advanced weaponry or skill as them, but it’s not what we got, it’s what we do with it…. That makes us wo we are” said melt. Melt’s words had motivated us, and we suddenly returned fire with the FLUXer’s who began to shoot at us. Mafia and Queen_Shine headed for an exit “Greedy_Bee, Fox, follow me!” ordered melt. I looked behind to see the rest of HACK facing off all of FLUX .
“GO!” said bedrock. I followed melt, and we chased after mafia, who lead us to another room… like an arena.
“Welcome to my favorite place”, said mafia “This is where people like you come to an end”, he added. “If we’re going to determine who leaves with victory, then we’ll deal this out, one on one, you and me, melt” said mafia. “Take this usp45, it doesn’t have an actual bullet, but a tranquilizing dart. If you get shot, then you’ll be alive, but you won’t move- ever again. One bullet, one shot”.
Meltingangel took the usp, and looked at us, and we took a step back. The fate of HACK rested in melt’s arms.
“He’s on a 20 killstreak” whispered Greedy_ Bee to me. “If he beats mafia, it will count as a kill, and he will unlock the ultimate weapon”. I stared at melt and mafia, who froze as they were in an attacking position. Melt moved first, and attempted to shoot his bullet. It missed. For a few minutes, the two leaders fought by hand, fought hard, until melt had finally made his mistake, and he was pinned down to the ground. Mafia held him against the cold floor. It was it. There would be no escape from Mafia’s grip.
As mafia slowly turned his usp toward melt, he said “Any last words, meltingangel?”
Melt took one look at mafia, straight in the eye
“Quack.” He said, and within a second, melting rolled, snatched mafia’s gun, twisted 360 degrees, and pointed the usp at mafia’s head.
“Dodge this” said melt.
Boom.
Mafia fell to the ground, his body frozen. Within a few seconds, the reset of the HACK clan had joined us. They all witnessed the scene. At a distance, Queen_Shine stood frozen. She was speechless.
“It’d be nice to stand here and celebrate, melt, but, that was your 21st kill in a row, if you haven’t noticed”.
“Indeed it is, Greedy_Bee”, replied melt. From a distance, a voice exclaimed the words “TACTICAL NUKE, INCOMING!”
“Alright, let’s get out of here” said melt. We all left, alog with Queen Shine, who was given full mercy, and as we returned to the cliff fro which we started, we saw the giant nuclear explosion blow the FLUX base to bits.

 

I agree with you, I had made this in one try, so I think I'll go ahead and make a new and improved version. Do you have any suggestions for what FLUX might have won?