Complete (please delete) Tribal Rivalries

Map looks a bit narrow from the screenshots and I think the wall in the middle is a bit soldier op

 

ill give ya some feedback once my pc is working again (n)

also what shaders did you use?

 

Hey, I'm just going to give you some feedback - and I'm not sure if you will like it or not, but it's my opinion (which is usually right x3).


Okay so I'm going to go ahead and point out some problems with the map:

• The map isn't symmetrical.
• The map is pretty basic, and it's on a flat world (Surrounded by grass.) - If it isn't part of the CTF Map itself, it needs to be removed completely.
• The outside of the map is a bunch of spheres, please make it more clean and make the edges out of coal.
• The map needs to consistently be 100x100, and should not go below that.
• If the flag is that fence with the skeleton skull on it, that is a HUGE no-no.
  • First off, the flag is in a really cramped space.
  • There is void under the fence...
  • Why is the flag in the middle of the map???
• You shouldn't be using sponges to navigate tunnels.
• The tunnels don't look natural at all >_>

If you want my opinion, no offense, but the map is pretty small - and sloppy. I would get more familiar with the fundamentals of CTF - so that you might understand all the problems your map has. What I just listed, is the surface of your problems... You can click This to view my CTF Map Making guide. It has a link for the map rules, and your map has broken so many of them

With some work, and some time, this map could have some potential. But for now, it won't be getting accepted anytime soon. If you would like, you can browse some of my CTF Maps.

Spoiler: CTF Map List (kfact)

/map 110858
/map 190862
/map 191125
/map 229617
/map 250633
/map 246080

 

Lock requested.