Poem CTF Poem/Rap V2

This might not be as good as the first but I might do more in the future. It'll probably suck XD It would sound better if you heard how I imagined it in my head, but oh well. I would have posted this in the CTF section, but I guess it just haaaaaaaas to be in literature.

So I log right on (pause) to CTF 5
50 out of 50 now it's do or die
Free day is today (pause) and that's just fine,
Cuz I get 20 kills with mage in no time
The map is pagodas, we're playing old school
I go mid field it's time to kill these fools
I see darth on red and he's approaching fast
Mage 1v1 it's time I leave him in a body cast
The fight begins and we're goin back and forth
I guess I should bring out my last re-sort
I run to the side where I do my best,
"Hey darth, have some lightning to chest"
Boom big explosion as he goes straight down
Mr. vader got sent all the way to void town
The game ends quick, I wish I coulda played more
We shoulda let the game just run it's course
But no, I'm sorry, let's just end it now
I didnt even get to layeth the smacketh down
But I guess it's ok, there's always next time
But wait, that might not be until 1 point 9 ;-;
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