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Idea Class Concept -- Space

Discussion in 'Capture the Flag' started by TWC123, Jun 12, 2015.

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Do you like this class idea?

  1. Yes

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  2. Needs improoving

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  3. Its ok

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  4. No

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  1. TWC123

    TWC123 Active Member

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    Class Concept -- Space (Free)

    Class Role

    This class is defence or recovery.

    Starting Items

    - Diamond Sword (renamed -- Space Blade)
    -x4 Streak
    - Redstone Torch (renamed -- Atmosphere Void)
    - End Portal (renamed -- Step Back)
    - Ghast Tear(renamed -- Chill Blast)
    - Bonemeal (renamed -- Blizzard)

    - Leather Helmet (White & unbreaking III)
    - Iron Chestplate (Unbreaking I)
    - Leather Leggings (White & unbreaking III)
    - Leather Boots (White & unbreaking III)

    Explanations

    Passive Abilities

    Always has night vision and jump boost I.

    Active Abilities

    -    Atmosphere Void is simple, when right clicked created a black particle dome (like elf) which coves 6x6 area, when this is activated all enemies who are inside or walk inside is given slowness VIII for 4 seconds (so paralysed) and if they are hit it adds an extra 1 heart of true damage. The Void will disappear after 6 seconds. Cooldown is 15 seconds.

    -Step Back is also simple, by right clicking the player is teleported where he/she was last 15 seconds ago. Cooldown is 30 seconds. But if he/she has the flag he/she will be teleported back where they were 5 seconds ago.

    -Chill Blast, when right clicked fires navy blue particles forwards (speed or a fully drawn bow), it reaches 15 blocks before it disappears. When an enemy is hit he/she is knocked back 4 blocks, is given slowness II for 3 seconds and gets 2 hearts of true damage. Cooldown is 15 seconds

    -Blizzard when right clicked creates a very dense group of white and blue particles in the area of 6x6 this lasts 15 seconds, when an enemy is inside it they will get: blindness II for 2 seconds and 1 second of visibility this lasts 9 seconds, and they get suffocation which gives 1/2 a heart true damage per 3 seconds that they are in the blizzard. Cooldown is 28 seconds.

    What do you think? Please comment and give feedback! Its always appreciated. OP? Too complicated?

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    #1 TWC123, Jun 12, 2015
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2015
  2. Romkelolol

    Romkelolol Well-Known Member

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    You shouldn't tag this many people, including mods and admins.

    As for the idea.
    there is one thing I can give to describe it


    Just add it :V
     
    #2 Romkelolol, Jun 12, 2015
  3. Sir_Inge

    Sir_Inge Well-Known Member

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    It's ok... The TP back thing is OP for caping.
     
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    #3 Sir_Inge, Jun 12, 2015
  4. DeadRhos

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    Yeah the step back would be super annoying, it's basically reinstating ninja ghost capping. Blizzard and Atmosphere Void seem a bit odd to put together, it's like you don't know what the theme is, but I like how they have a similar mechanic. Another thing to bear in mind is that it's REALLY particle-intensive... it's best to stay away from excessive particles, as they can cause a lot of lag on slower computers. Other than that, good job ^^
     
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    #4 DeadRhos, Jun 12, 2015
  5. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    The step back thing would be funny you like go to flag then run out with everyone chasing you then you use the step back thing and go to flag and area and cap. But yes it needs improving.
     
    #5 Daveeeeeeeee, Jun 12, 2015
  6. Lujiu

    Lujiu Active Member

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    Here are my suggestion to improve this class
    1.) Change name (Space -----> Ghost or Phantom)
    2.) Change chestplate (diamond ------> leather dyed black)
    3.) Change setback to teleport you to where you were located 5 seconds ago and reduce cool-down to 7 seconds
    4.) Change atmo sphere to only give slowness 2 and blindness to everyone inside of the sphere. Increase its range to a 6 block radius around the caster. Make it to where when this class hits something inside the sphere it deals 1 extra damage. Decrease cool-down to 12 seconds.
    5.) Remove blizzard. There seems no point for it because it already as atmo sphere.

    Other then that I really like the class. I think its one of the best ones suggested so far (the only one that would be nice to see in ctf.)
     
    #6 Lujiu, Jun 12, 2015
  7. Ironic_Gentleman

    Ironic_Gentleman Well-Known Member

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    That Step Back would still be OP. Honestly, I feel like it should just be removed. I know this is frustrating because it's a defining feature of the class, but: It would go the flag, pick it up, and be out of the flagroom before the defence can react. It wouldn't be quite ghosting, but it would be pretty close. Close enough to cause problems.
     
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    #7 Ironic_Gentleman, Jun 12, 2015
  8. TWC123

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    @Sir_Inge
    Ok yes I agree, I didn't see that when I was making the class, I have changed it so that the player is teleported back 5 seconds not 15.

    @Rhoske when I make a class I always look if they have a big connection. I normally think of the ideas first before the name e.g Atmosphere Void, in space astronauts feel freezing/cold. Both Chill blast and Blizzard both come under the category of cold. What I am trying to prove is I do know the theme. :stuck_out_tongue: How can I make it less particle intensive but keeping these ideas?

    @SportyMinecraft already explained ^^^^^ (I answered Sir_Inge)

    @Lujiu
    1) Why? They are all connected. Blizzard and Chill Blast are to do with cold. Atmosphere Void and Step Back, in experience they feel cold (astronauts in space, characters in movies feel cold when they travel back in time). So I had to think of a name which had cold and also had a connection with all the abilities so I chose Space.
    2) I don't see why but I have changed it to iron.
    3) Already said before. Read what I have said to Sir_Inge.
    4) Have you just lowered Atmosphere Void and joint it with Blizzard?
    5) There is a point as its part of the whole concept.
    6) You don't like Reaper?

    @Ironic_Gentleman fixed it read what I have said to Sir_Inge.

    All of you I have tagged! Thanks for this extremely good feedback! And you didn't see anything wrong with Chill Blast!?
     
    #8 TWC123, Jun 13, 2015
  9. Lujiu

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    @Lujiu
    1) Why? They are all connected. Blizzard and Chill Blast are to do with cold. Atmosphere Void and Step Back, in experience they feel cold (astronauts in space, characters in movies feel cold when they travel back in time). So I had to think of a name which had cold and also had a connection with all the abilities so I chose Space.
    2) I don't see why but I have changed it to iron.
    3) Already said before. Read what I have said to Sir_Inge.
    4) Have you just lowered Atmosphere Void and joint it with Blizzard?
    5) There is a point as its part of the whole concept.
    6) You don't like Reaper?

    @Ironic_Gentleman fixed it read what I have said to Sir_Inge.

    All of you I have tagged! Thanks for this extremely good feedback! And you didn't see anything wrong with Chill Blast!?[/QUOTE]

    1.) Ctf's classes are all medieval / mythical and are not things like "astronaught or space" it branches far out of ctf's classical feel.
    2.) I reduced the armor to allow it to balance out with my suggestions
    3.) Ctf is a faced passed game. You shouldn't have to wait 30 seconds to use one of your only abilities.
    4.) I didnt lower Atmosphere without making another part of it better.
    5.) You are being clingy on your "concept"
    6.) I don't like any of class suggestions... but if we HAD to add a class I would pick this one so far.
     
    #9 Lujiu, Jun 13, 2015
  10. Akejsa

    Akejsa Active Member

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    I think this shouldn't be a free class, as I said in your other thread on Reaper. Don't get me wrong, I like your creations/ideas, they just don't simple enough to be free. Free classes need to be simple.
    But yeah, I agree with Lujiu, CTF classes were made to be mythical/medival.
     
    #10 Akejsa, Jun 13, 2015
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